The Eye of The Kalamatrix

The Eye of Kalamatrix (detail) | Artwork and gif. animation©️Lesley Scoble

The Pantoum

The structure of a pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the 2nd and 4th lines of a quatrain recur as the 1st and 3rd lines in the succeeding quatrain; each quatrain introduces a new 2nd rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. 

The first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing quatrain, and third line of the poem recurs as the 2nd line of the closing quatrain, rhyming ZAZA.

Lines 2 and 4 become lines 1 and 3 in the succeeding stanzas. Until the last stanza.

The Last Stanza

Line one of the first stanza becomes the last line of the last stanza and the third line of the first stanza becomes the second line in the last stanza

The Eye of the Kalamatrix | Artwork©️Lesley Scoble

I hope you enjoyed my first pantoum! Two days ago I didn’t know what a pantoum poem was.


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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17 responses to “The Eye of The Kalamatrix: a pantoum poem”

    1. Thank you Tanmay 😊 kind of you to say so 💕

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  1. fan-friggin’-tastic, Lesley… and that graphic too! Amazing!

    ~David

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    1. Wow thank you David! 🙏☺️

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  2. Lovely Pantoum, wonderfully illustrated. Enjoyed much. 🙂

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    1. Thank you Kittyverses 🙏💕Happy you enjoyed it 🙂x

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  3. Love the poem and doubly for the art work!! A beautiful combination!

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  4. This Pantoum is great fun Lesley. And I love the graphic – I keep rolling my screen up and down to open the eye!

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    1. Oh that’s wonderful! I’m so glad I drew it now!😊
      Thank you 🙏 🐉

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  5. The artwork is so good. And it blinks too! Loved the pantoum. ❤

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    1. Thank you Aditi! Your comments about the artwork and my first pantoum mean a lot to me 🙏 💕 Thank you so much for this pantoum prompt challenge

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  6. Lesley,

    I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by our beloved Murisopsis, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #21: Wea’ve Written Weekly


    David

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    1. Thanks David 😎 Thanks for letting me know 🙏😊

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