The host Laura Bloomsbury for MTB: Rocking the Imayo, d’Verse Poets invites us to write an Imayo poem about rocks.

The Imayo

The imayo is a poem form from 12th century Japan that was originally intended for song. 

It has since been adapted into a poem with four 12-syllable lines, each divided up into sections of seven and five syllables by a caesura. 

This is its structure:

  • 4 lines (8 lines permissible)
  • 12 syllables per line divided as7/5
  • make a pause space between the 7 and 5 syllables
  • use comma, caesura or kireji (cutting word) as the pause
  • no rhymes
  • no meter
  • no end of line pauses – the whole should flow together as though one long sentence
Please Note: Your subject must be the noun ‘rock/rocks’ (can be interchanged with stone).

I wrote about a favourite stone I found on Normans Bay beach, E. Sussex. This is my first attempt at writing an Imayo.

The Happy Stone

The Happy Stone, Normans Bay beach | Photo©️Lesley Scoble
The happy stone smiles unseen, alone and yet not
faceless stones are everywhere, tons are on the beach
where sun shines and glints oblique, over all of them
The stone is content to be; alone in a crowd

Lesley Scoble, July 2023

My thanks to Laura Bloomsbury and to the d’Verse Poets for introducing me to the Imayo. I’d never heard of it.

POST SCRIPT
I post this poem for OLN #342 as I missed the deadline for Laura’s MTB: Rocking the Imayo


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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35 responses to “The Happy Stone: an imayo”

  1. You got stones…

    I have seen faces on rocks before, but never on a stone, and such a cheerful one too. That is quite a find, Lesley, and a lovely imayo.

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    1. Thank you dear friend,
      I keep it my camera case to give me a smile now and then 🙂

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  2. Lovely take Lesley.

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    1. You’re so kind, Sadje 🙏😊 Thank you 💗

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  3. Rock on, Lesley! 😎 🤘🏼

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  4. Like they say … “It’s 5 o’clock somewhere!” Cheers, Lesley!

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    1. Cheers, Nancy 🍹 Your good health!

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  5. Well, now I know what an imayo is. Thank you. And I like yours. The photo is wonderful, so much to see in it.
    Thank you for visiting the Unicorn Challenge. Perhaps you’d like to join in sometime? You’d be most welcome.-

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    1. Thank you Jenny,
      I never knew what an imayo is either 😁
      I appreciate your kind comment 🙏😊
      I should love to join in a Unicorn Challenge 💗

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    2. I wrote Jenne but the computer changed it 🌹

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      1. I was familiar with the haiku and the tanka and am glad to add imayo to my vocabulary.
        No problem about the name, Lesley! Predictive text doesn’t like anything unusual! 😏
        I hope you’ll come along to the Unicorn Challenge on my blog next Saturday: https://talesfromglasgow137065088.wordpress.com/blog/
        Have a good week!

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  6. alone in a crowd – isn’t that all of us and so good if we can be content there…

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    1. Yes indeed. Thank you for your comment, Frewin 😊

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  7. I love that smiling stone, Lesley, and the metaphor resonated with me – I too am content to be alone in a crowd.

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    1. Oh, that’s brilliant, Kim 🙂
      So pleased 💗

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  8. An interesting style, Lesley, thanks for sharing it!

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    1. Thank you Steve,
      The imayo is a new one for me. 😊

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      1. You did well with it!

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  9. Both the photo and the Imayo impressed me.
    What a golden find…

    So nice to find you. I visit London a couple of times a year. Maybe you should meet one of my daughters, who is very creative, a dancer, young and a bit searching. We’ll be in London in November (week of Remembrance Day).

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  10. Your happy stone makes me smile…you definitely rocked the imayo!

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    1. Thank you Lynn,
      Your comment makes me as happy as the stone! 😊💗

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  11. A wonderful write. I am a stone lover so this spoke to me.

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    1. Thank you Ali! 🙏😊💗
      I pick stones up all the time 😁

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  12. Gorgeous use of metaphor here, Lesley! 🥰🥰

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    1. Thank you sanaarizvi! 💗
      most kind 🙏

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