Whimsygizmo host for d’Verse Poets Quadrille #180: Pouring Out Our Poems invites us to pen a poem of exactly 44 words, including some form of the word water.

I’m in a dramatic stormy mood this morning, so I wrote 44 words about sharp, pointy rain.

Water Daggers

Storm | Charcoal sketch on Artic White Watercolour paper | ©️Lesley Scoble

Listen to the wind

Water Daggers

The wind howls around and cleaves;
Stripping branches of their leaves 
Water daggers stab in horizontal strokes 
Chestnuts, willows, elms and oaks  

Hewing boughs apart asunder 
Felling great tree trunks in lightning and thunder 
Strewing striking through the wood 
Uprooting trees where they stood.


Lesley Scoble, July 2023

Thank you Whimsygizmo and d’Verse Poets for your inspiration.

Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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23 responses to “Water Daggers: a quadrille”

  1. water daggers

    brilliant imagery, Lesley!

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    1. Merci, (sorry, still got a touch of the je ne sais quoi)
      🙏😊🌹

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  2. You’ve whipped up quite the storm in your poem Lesley. Wonderful

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    1. Thanks Sadje,
      I’m feeling a bit wild today 😁🙏💗

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  3. “dramatic stormy mood” = great poetry.

    much enjoyed, Lesley 🤍

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    1. ❤️Thank yo Destiny! 🙂 great compliment ❤️
      Very pleased you enjoyed it xx🌹

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      1. most welcome 🤍🌹

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  4. Love your use of description here, showing the powerful nature of water.🌧️

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    1. Merci beaucoup Melissa 😊
      so kind 💗

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  5. Like snow in blizzards, when rain goes horizontal in the howling wind, you know it’s a bad one.

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    1. You do indeed! 🌧️

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  6. Excellent! And I’m reading this in the midst of a raging thunder storm! What could be better? 💨 ⛈️ 💦 🌬️

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    1. Wow! You have the full orchestra! A worthy accompaniment to my poem 😂
      How marvellous. I love storms. We get few dramatic ones here.

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      1. Oh, we had a real whopper last night! It was so fabulous, I broke out in song! 🤣

        Thunderbolts and lightning,
        very, very frightening me
        Galileo, Galileo
        Galileo, Galileo
        Galileo, Figaro – magnifico 😎

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  7. Wild and beautiful Lesley 💕

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    1. Thank you Poetsatinta, 🙏💗😊

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  8. Your sketch is wonderful, and the rhyme and cadence of your words are spot on for this storm.

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    1. Thank you Whimsy (how may I call you?) for your lovely comment. ‘tis so appreciated 🙏🌹

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  9. Incredible poem! Fantastic imagery, and a good pounding rhythm. The audio definitely added to the experience of reading the poem.

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    1. This is a review one longs to read. Thank you Nicole 🎈💕

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