Whimsygizmo host for dβVerse Poets Quadrille #180: Pouring Out Our Poems invites us to pen a poem of exactly 44 words, including some form of the word water.
Iβm in a dramatic stormy mood this morning, so I wrote 44 words about sharp, pointy rain.
Water Daggers
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Listen to the wind
Water Daggers The wind howls around and cleaves; Stripping branches of their leaves Water daggers stab in horizontal strokes Chestnuts, willows, elms and oaks Hewing boughs apart asunder Felling great tree trunks in lightning and thunder Strewing striking through the wood Uprooting trees where they stood. Lesley Scoble, July 2023
Thank you Whimsygizmo and dβVerse Poets for your inspiration.
Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired byβ¦ Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.
23 responses to “Water Daggers: a quadrille”
brilliant imagery, Lesley!
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Merci, (sorry, still got a touch of the je ne sais quoi)
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Youβve whipped up quite the storm in your poem Lesley. Wonderful
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Thanks Sadje,
Iβm feeling a bit wild today πππ
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Awesome
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“dramatic stormy mood” = great poetry.
much enjoyed, Lesley π€
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β€οΈThank yo Destiny! π great compliment β€οΈ
Very pleased you enjoyed it xxπΉ
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most welcome π€πΉ
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Love your use of description here, showing the powerful nature of water.π§οΈ
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Merci beaucoup Melissa π
so kind π
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Like snow in blizzards, when rain goes horizontal in the howling wind, you know it’s a bad one.
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You do indeed! π§οΈ
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Excellent! And I’m reading this in the midst of a raging thunder storm! What could be better? π¨ βοΈ π¦ π¬οΈ
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Wow! You have the full orchestra! A worthy accompaniment to my poem π
How marvellous. I love storms. We get few dramatic ones here.
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Oh, we had a real whopper last night! It was so fabulous, I broke out in song! π€£
Thunderbolts and lightning,
very, very frightening me
Galileo, Galileo
Galileo, Galileo
Galileo, Figaro – magnifico π
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Wild and beautiful Lesley π
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Thank you Poetsatinta, πππ
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Your sketch is wonderful, and the rhyme and cadence of your words are spot on for this storm.
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Thank you Whimsy (how may I call you?) for your lovely comment. βtis so appreciated ππΉ
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Incredible poem! Fantastic imagery, and a good pounding rhythm. The audio definitely added to the experience of reading the poem.
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This is a review one longs to read. Thank you Nicole ππ
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