A magical new weekly writing opportunity from Jenne Gray and  C. E. Ayr who invite us to write a short story each Friday.

Unicorn Challenge 25 August 2023

This week’s Unicorn Writing Challenge is to write a short story inspired by this image, of no more than 250.

The old man and his bike | Digital illustration; pen and wash©️Lesley Scoble


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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22 responses to “The Old Man and his tRusty Bike: a short story”

  1. Aww, I was hoping for a happy ending

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    1. So was I! I couldn’t think of one 😔

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      1. Yup, sometimes the story writes itself

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    2. I think it’s because we have the loudest thunderstorm going on at the moment! 😁

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      1. Stay safe my friend

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      2. Thanks Sadje, so much ❤️
        I love thunderstorms. They are dramatic.
        All over now, leaving a lovely wafting petrichor. 💚

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      3. How lovely 😍

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  2. The way I’m reading this is that the bike finally died after serving the man all this time. The man did not die, at least not on his wedding day! How incredibly sad would that be?
    This is the “The Giving Bike”, a cyclist’s edition of Shel Silverstein’s “The Giving Tree”. Poor old bike.

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    1. Well, it was very rusty. 😁 Poor old bike.

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    2. The way it ended wasn’t my fault. It was the word count’s fault.
      I’ll look up the Giving Tree 🌳 💕

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  3. Aww, well, at least he died doing something he loved ❤

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    1. 😢
      At the start i intended it to be a comedy. I don’t know what happened. ❤️
      He was going to fall over the handlebars into a puddle and squelch up the aisle…

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    Enjoyed your story, Leslie.

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    1. Thank you, Angela 🙏😊
      Glad you did x

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  5. That’s the way to go out, Lesley, still living your life!
    And maybe the bike reckoned that death was better than marriage, hmm?

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    1. Yes, indeed, C. E.
      You may well be right! 😁💗

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  6. What the heck, did you just kill off the groom? I love the picture you made off of the original picture. Man fights in a war, comes home to his bike, dies before getting hitched.

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    1. Haha 😂 Yes!
      I didn’t intend to kill him off, but it just happened!

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  7. Oh, Lesley, the romantic in me is struggling not to believe he died on his wedding day – after having waited that long!
    But stories go where they want to go!
    I read how he viewed his bike after the war as the effect of the war on him – nothing is ever so bright after an experience like that.
    Great graphic too.

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    1. Thanks so much, Jenne! I enjoyed the challenge very much.
      I set out to write a comedy 😂 but as you say,—stories go where they want! (also, I needed more word count for the comedy).

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  8. This is a lovely story, and the illustration from the photo is just as warm.
    Is it NOT a happy ending? They died as they lived. Together. It’s a sweet ending!

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    1. Oh, thank you so much, Liz! Glad you see it that way 😊💖

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