The Poet of the Week for W3 Weekly Prompt #69 is A. J. Wilson (Ange), Poetsatinta. Here are her prompt guidelines.

That’s how the moonlight gets in | Photo©️Lesley Scoble

Dry earth | Photo©️Lesley Scoble

My thanks to David, Skeptic Kaddish, host for the W3 Weekly Prompt #69.
Special thanks to Poet of the Week, A. J. Wilson (Ange), Poetsatinta for this remarkable challenge to write a poem to include 2 to 3 immortal lines (in order) from Leonard Cohen’s legendary song Anthem.

There are cracks in old walls where wildflowers will grow | Photo©️Lesley Scoble

I was so lucky to have front row seats at Leonard Cohen’s last concert tour to London. My brother was his Tour Manager. Here is a snapshot of my brother with the legend, in rehearsal.

My brother with Leonard Cohen

Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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30 responses to “At the Crack of Dawn: a poem after Leonard Cohen”

  1. Lesley, you may have struggled with this particular prompt, but the result is magnificent!


    David

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    1. Magnificent is word that lifts my spirits on this Monday morning! Thank you so much, David. I couldn’t write a thing yesterday—so went for a long walk, and saw cracks in the pavement 😁

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      1. and now we’ve seen them too!

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      2. I wrote a whole verse on cracks in the pavement, but had to cut them due to line count 😁

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      3. hi, Lesley ❤

        Just wanna let you know that this weeks W3, hosted by the lovely Elizabeth of 'Tea and Paper' is now live:

        W3 Prompt #70: Wea’ve Written Weekly

        Enjoy!

        Much love,
        David

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      4. Thanks David,
        Tree-mendous! 💚🌲💚

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  2. Beautifully written Lesley.

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  3. Great job, Lesley! I adore Leonard Cohen … and you, of course! Here’s a cute little monkey for you! Hahaha!! 🐒

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  4. Oooh, ta ❤️🙈 🙉 🙊 ❤️

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  5. The exploration of cracks as unique messages from nature…. superbly written, Lesley.

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    1. Thank you, Suzette, 🙏🌹💖
      You are most kind xx

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  6. Lesley, I love how, in this poem, you explored all the variety of ‘cracks’ we face, I think Leonard would be a fan – you were so lucky to have seen this great man and you also are making my task of selecting POW that bit harder, thanks for sharing ❤️

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    1. Thank you for this enormous compliment, Ange, The idea that he might be a fan has made my week (if not my year!). (I was lucky enough to meet the legend, too.)
      Sorry, and yet delighted to make your task harder! 😆
      Not an easy task choosing from so many wonderful poems…. and poets.
      ❤️💗❤️

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      1. Thanks Lesley, now I’m more envious that you actually met him! 😄

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  7. This is such a wonderful poem. You did a fantastic job of incorporating Leonard Cohen’s words. I am envious that you saw him live!

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    1. Thank you so much, Heather! 💕

      When I saw him live, I didn’t realise at the time how marvellous it was, nor how much it would influence me. My memory treasures the performances (I saw more than one). I don’t want to make you envious, though. 😉💚

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  8. Well done, Lesley, this is brilliant.

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    1. Wow! Thank you, Roberta, 😁
      Brilliant is one of my favourite words! 💕🌹

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  9. How wonderful to see him live. Love this crackingly wonderful poem.

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  10. This is beautiful. I love it.

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  11. Gorgeous poem!! I love the rhyme and the theme! Cracks are everywhere!!

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  12. Absolutely cracking poem, Lesley, and I know my cracks…

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    1. You can’t beat a good crack! (Irish for conversation) 😂

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  13. I love your addition to those beautiful words. Very lovely poem. ❤️

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    1. Thank you so much 🙏💗
      You are very kind 🌹

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