Deepthy is this week’s Poet of the Week for the W3 Weekly #73 poetry prompt. Here are her prompt guidelines.

I wrote a senryū to include the quote by Stephen Chbosky. My feeling is that I am a cheat, as his words make up two-thirds of my poem. I painted the abstract digital painting in pink as I’ve decided the universe is pink in That Moment.

And in that moment, I swear we were infinite stars in outer space | Abstract digital painting©️Lesley Scoble


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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37 responses to “And In That Moment: a senryū”

  1. Lesley ~ that’s beautiful! What program do you use to create digital paintings?


    David

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    1. Thanks, David,
      I switch between the apps, ArtSet and Procreate on my iPad. 🎨😊
      (never worked so hard on a poem in my life! 😆)

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      1. hi, Lesley!

        Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved and loving Selma, is now live:

        W3 Prompt #74: Wea’ve Written Weekly

        Enjoy!

        Much love,
        David

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    2. They’re great fun to use. ArtSet has a nice selection of paper textures.

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  2. Bravo! you made a cakewalk of the prompt, thanks for sharing.

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    1. Thank you, Selma! 😊💗xx

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  3. so beautiful, Lesley 🤍

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    1. 😊 💗 Thanks, Destiny 💗🙏

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  4. Your painting is wonderful, a beautiful pinkish universe, and the poem is lovely.

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    1. 💗 Thank you so much, Elizabeth 💗

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  5. No not cheating at all, making it your own, the last line is wonderful which takes the quote and makes it a poem.

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    1. Gosh, thanks, Paul. Your comment means much to me 🙏😊🌹

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      1. You are very welcome Lesley 🙂

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  6. I don’t think it’s cheating at all – you’ve given it a whole new perspective! The painting is absolutely lovely – pink looks great on the universe ✨❣️

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    1. Thank you so much, Deepthy! 🙏💗
      And for the awesome prompt. It’s the fastest poem I’ve ever written! 😆

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      1. Of course! Haha, it sure doesn’t show!😂❣️

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  7. Thanks for sharing this idea

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  8. I agree with others. I like that you’ve added “stars in outer space”, because they are infinite to us. The painting also adds your own personal touch, which I love.

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    1. 🙏💗😊 Thank you, Melissa 🌟

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  9. The stars do inspire that awe. And wonderful painting! (K)

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    1. 🌟Thank you, Kerfe! 🌟🙏😊xx

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  10. Lovely Lesley and your art work supports it beautifully ❤️

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  11. Your poem ͏is so beaut͏iful! 😍 It captures the mag͏ic and wonder of a moment when everyth͏ing feels ͏inf͏in͏ite. The ͏imagery of be͏ing stars ͏in outer space ͏is so evocat͏ive and dreamy. It’s as ͏if you and the person you’re descr͏ib͏ing are transcend͏ing the boundar͏ies of t͏ime and space, becom͏ing part of someth͏ing greater. The ͏idea of be͏ing ͏inf͏in͏ite ͏in that moment ͏is so powerful and ͏insp͏ir͏ing. 🌹 👍👌😊

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    1. 🙏 Thank you, Pankaj,
      🌟Your comment means so much to me.🌟🌹

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  12. Lovely – the poem and the art!

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    1. Thank you, Muri! 😊❤️

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  13. A lovely poem, Lesley, and I love your artwork.

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  14. You and I were on a similar wave length with the quote. But, your poem is out of this world, especially with that artwork!! I loved it.

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    1. Wow! Thank you so much, Heather 🙏😊💗
      Just read yours and it’s so lovely. 💙🌟

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