Suzanne Brace is the Poet of the Week for W3 Weekly Poetry Prompt #78. Her prompt guidelines are below.

I wrote my poem MERRY-GO-ROUND in response to Suzanne’s prompt to share an emotion. I shall let the poem speak the emotion’s name.


Merry-go-round, Brighton | Photo©️Lesley Scoble

Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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31 responses to “Merry-go-round: a dectina refrain”

  1. Well done Lesley! I love your Dectina!

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    1. Thanks, Suzette! 🙏❤️

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  2. Wow! A very effective dectina, Lesley. You’re inspiring me to give it a try!

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    1. Thank you so much, Dora!🙏
      Yes, give it a go! It’s only ten lines. 😁❤️

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  3. Hi Lesley, I have googled this and read many acknowledgements of this form and all say “Marion Friedenthal and Luke Prater are both associated with the creation of a poetry form known as the ‘Dectina Refrain’. Marion Friedenthal invented this form, and it was named ‘Dectina Refrain’ by Luke Prater”. In just one site, the next poetry form is mentioned, that is credited to Luke Prater, English Poet, so I would “assume” being on the same page it would be referring to the same person, but I have not been able to find anything more on this.
    In regards to your poem, I read it as the merry-go-round being the metaphor for life, the emotion the mix of unknown excitement and apprehension of the unknown, and the fear of the journey and what it could mean …? I really enjoyed the piece. It could also be more literal with a child taking a ride for the first time, again excitement, fear, and a wave each turn around…. both ways are lovely – did I understand correctly?

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    1. Actually, I have just re-read, it is the people left behind, saying not to be sad to those leaving but to have fun on their merry-go-round of life ….? 💞

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      1. Oh, I like that ending very much, Suzanne. 👏💗

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    2. I love the way you are thinking, Suzanne❤️😊🌹
      Did you understand correctly?
      I’ll go ask the muse.
      💓💓
      I’m surprised there is so little about Marion and Luke. I looked online too.

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  4. You’re very good at this. And there’s something about a roundabout…

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    1. Thank you very much, restless Jo 🙏💓
      Yes, there is, isn’t there? 🧡

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  5. There really is no good way to say goodbye. (K)

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    1. Yes, but the merry go round always comes around again… Then are times to say ‘hello’ as well!

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      1. Circles are much better in that regard than lines. As they are in so many instances.

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    1. Hear, hear! Elegant and beautiful indeed, Lesley!

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    2. Thank you so much 🙏🩵

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      1. Hi, Lesley! 👋🏻

        Just wanna let you know that this week’s prompt, hosted by the delightful Deanna Avery, is now live:

        W3 Prompt #79: Wea’ve Written Weekly

        Much love,
        David

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      2. Graciás muy señor, 🙏

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  6. Such an interesting and well penned poem. Goodbyes are what we remember aren’t they?

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    1. Yes, we do.
      💗 Thank you for the compliment, D. 🙏💗

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    1. 💗🙏 Sadje, thanks 💗

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      1. You’re welcome Lesley

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  7. Wonderful! Life is indeed a series of coming and goings. We say fare the well to those who leave us and a joyful reunion when they circle back. I find I’m on this merry-go-round especially with my sons….

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    1. How lovely, Muri, and thanks 😊❤️
      Life is a merry-go-round. I enjoy it with my sons too 🥳

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    1. 💓😊 Thank you, Heather 🙏xx

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      1. You’re welcome.

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