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I wrote my poem. I SAID NOTHING for Melissaβs Fandango Flash Fiction Challenge #249.
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I Said Nothing
I said nothing.
I was shocked,
I couldnβt believe my eyes.
My mouth was locked.
The wind moaned.
The trees swayed with leaf lorn sighs
The clouds cried
Heavy tears of thundery, sodden rain.
I said nothing.
I couldnβt,
Or wouldnβt.
My mouth was locked.
The whole world rocked,
And I watched the pain.
The gun half cocked,
But I did nothing.
Lesley Scoble, January 2023
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
Thank you Melissa for your inspiring #FFFC writing and poetry prompt.
Image credit: Justin Essah on Unsplash
Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired byβ¦ Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.
16 responses to “I Said Nothing: a silent poem”
Youβve captured the inner struggle that could be faced by many, who want to help, but for whatever reason, do nothing. I like how the clouds cried, it adds great emphasis to the pain caused by humankind.ππ»
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Thanks, Melissa,
I wrote it very quickly after reading your poem which inspired me. I posted it straight after writing. Hope i donβt regret that. I like to ruminate a while before postingβ¦ Iβm bound to think of other linesβ¦
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Sometimes I go back and edit my poems right on the post, instead of reposting as a different version.
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I feel like this.
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Thank you, Nicole, Iβm glad it reached you. ππ
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Cheers, Matt π
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Hi Lesley, it is not easy to offer assistance in a war situation, especially if you have children. I often wonder what I would have done if I’d been in an occupied country during WW2. Would I have risked my family to help others? I couldn’t be sure really unless I was in such a situation.
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Certainly makes one think.
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A very poignant poem Lesley
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Thank you, Sadje. πππ
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Youβre welcome
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Beautifully written! β€οΈ
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Thank you so much πππ
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