Homeless in a doorway | “Huddled unseen by each passer by” | Photo©️Lesley Scoble


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools andu theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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17 responses to “Homeless: a reverse poem”

  1. Lesley,

    You skillfully navigate a poignant social commentary, unfolding from top to bottom and vice versa. The contrast between the callous sentiments and the stark reality faced by the homeless is so striking to me…

    These words:

    Shelter in cardboard boxes, Like untoward strays,

    Wow.

    ~David

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    1. 🙏Thank you sincerely, David
      Your support is invaluable 🙏 and treasured 🌹

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      1. Hi, Lesley! 👋🏻

        Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted my l’il ol’ me, is now live:

        W3 Prompt #90: Wea’ve Written Weekly

        Enjoy!

        Much love,
        David

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      2. Thanks, David 🙏😊

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  2. I had a difficult time with this one, too. It definitely is a talent to be able to write them so well. I like the topic you’ve addressed. Good job.👏🏻

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    1. Thank so much, Trip 🙏😊💕

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  3. Reverse poems are so hard to do well. I think you did an amazing job!

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    1. Thanks, Sally! How did I miss your lovely comment? Sorry 🙏💖

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  4. Oh dear.. I think you nailed it..and with such a difficult subject matter as well. The challenge was rather difficult this week .David and Aboli really tested us. But you did quite well, Lesley. 👏🙏

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    1. Oh, thank you, Nigel 🙏😊💗
      ‘Twas exceptionally difficult for me!
      Appreciate your comment very much🌹

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  5. Wow, this is fantastic, Lesley. You made a difficult job seem so easy, bravo!!

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    1. Gosh, thank you, Kitty! it wasn’t easy! I found it very very difficult. 😁❤️🙏 I had to dig up some brain cells…

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  6. Honestly, Lesley your poem leaves me speechless. I love how you have highlighted the plight of the homeless ❤️ With so many stellar entries it will be tough to decide 😂

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    1. Gosh, thank you, Aboli 💕🙏
      You certainly stretched us with this amazing prompt. I’m very grateful to you. (I gave up more than once). The task of the POW is not an enviable one. Good luck! Go with your gut (or heart) 😁 Your poem twanged on my heart. ❤️

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  7. Great subject and reversed so well Les;ey 🙌

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    1. Thanks so much, AJ 🙏😊🙃❤️

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