Frank Tassone, the poet host for the d’Verse Poets Haibun Monday, invites us to write a haibun alluding to: breath, breathing, or to breathe.

I took the title photo below, a few years ago of a piece of graffiti, in Folkestone, Kent, thinking that it might make a good title for something, sometime.

I titled my haibun Breathless. I hope you enjoy it.

Breathless | Street art graffiti, Folkestone | Photo©️Lesley Scoble

The view from the hill o’er the vale to London | Digital watercolour painting ©️Lesley Scoble

ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
My thanks to Frank Tassone, for the inspiring prompt.
My thanks also to the community of remarkable poets at d’Verse Poets.

Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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24 responses to “Breathless: a haibun”

  1. Lovely…. I see pictures in clouds and I see a skier…! ❤️

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    1. That’s wonderful, Suzanne! I trust it’s a breathless skier? 😁

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  2. So many wonderful sensory images. I loved the line “It chuffed a rhythmic puff, puff, puff. “

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    1. Thank you so much, Heather. I’m chuff, chuff, chuffed you like it. 😊🙏❤️

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      1. You’re welcome!

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  3. This is splendid. I loved reading the runner’s journey through street, and park, and up the hill. The haiku is spectacular.

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    1. Oooh, thank you! I have many alternatives for the haiku—I kept wondering whether to change it. I shall now leave it as it is. 😁
      Your haibun inspired me to have a go., so thank you dear Trip. 🙏😊💕

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  4. Lesley, I really really like how you capture the intensity and serenity of a runner’s journey, culminating in a breathless pause at the hill’s summit!

    ~David

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    1. I’m really pleased. Thank you, David ☺️❤️

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  5. Love your haibun Lesley.

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    1. Aw, Sadje, thank you ☺️❤️

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      1. You’re welcome ☺️

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  6. I love the watercolor and feel every breath and step of the runner. Good one!

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    1. Thank you, Cris, 😊🙏
      I appreciate your lovely comment. 💕

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  7. Love the different phases of the running… despite it being London, I hear “Eye of the tiger” and see Rocky running up the stairs.

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    1. How fabulous, Björn! I could change it from London to Philadelphia (although that’s too many syllables) 😄
      Thank you so much for your great comment🙏😊

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  8. Lesley, what Bjorn said, plus your haiku was icing on the cake. This is a person with a passion and there is beauty in beholding that kind of passion.

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    1. 🙏❤️ Thank you from my heart, msjadeli, ☺️xxx

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      1. You’re very welcome, Lesley ❤

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  9. Your digital art is indeed breathless! Lovely Haibun!

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    1. Thank you, Elizabeth! 🙏💕☺️

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