I wrote my kimo poem Sun Halo in response to Muri’s month long poetry challenge Looking at Poems Around the World. Day 14’s prompt is from Israel.
Click here for details of the Day 14 poetry prompt
14. Israel: Kimo – A post-Haiku form of 3 lines with a strict syllable count of 10/7/6. There is no rhyme. Like the Haiku it should not use unnecessary words. Maybe you’d like to write about heaven or hell?
Sun Halo
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Phenomenal halo around the sun
iced jewels at 22 degrees
rare heavenly circle
Lesley Scoble, April 2024
My son Daniel took this shot while on a run along by the river, showing a partial sun halo over the Battersea Power Station, London.
![](https://lesleyscoble.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/04/img_7354.jpeg?w=990)
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
Thank you, Val/ Muri for your Poems Around the World prompt.
I took the photos of the rare sun halo on my iPhone yesterday (14th April) at Rainham Marshes RSPB Nature Reserve. It occurred to me that the heavenly phenomenon might fit Muri’s ‘heaven or hell’ prompt!
Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.
22 responses to “Sun Halo: a kimo poem”
How lovely…. 🥰 (you were very near to me yesterday!) 💞
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WOW, Your kidding! 😁 It was a beautiful day. xx We were bird watching.
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Yes it’s lovely over there! My mum loves Grays which is the next town on…. 💞
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Lives … (predictive text!)
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I’ve never been to Grays. Must put it on the visit list. 😊
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That’s a rare halo. Great photo and poem. 🙂
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Thank you, Kitty 💖 It was amazing to see. It had an ethereal and almost apocalyptic feel to it… xx
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You are welcome, Lesley. I had seen this for the first time last year but couldn’t take a photo. Your photo is amazing. 🙂
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Oh Lesley that is a perfect poem for that prompt! And the photo is spectacular! I’ve seen sun dogs but not a sun halo!
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Thank you so much, Muri! I’ve never seen or heard of a sun halo before. It was awesome. 💖
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Thanks for sharing the photos as well as the poem!
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Thank you, and are very welcome, Serendippity 💖
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Hi Lesley, a lovely poem and a great picture taken by your son.
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Thank you, Robbie 🙏😊 I’m thrilled you like Daniel’s photo. We can take photos from the same spot and his are always better. ❤️
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Some people have a back for photography 💞
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That should have been knack not back
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I understood 😁 I translate typos 💖 xx
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So beautiful 🤩
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So are you, Sadje🥰 Thank you 🙏
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🥰🥰🥰
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Oh goodness 🥺 It’s beautiful, Lesley!
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