I wrote my poem, Around and Around for the W3 Prompt. Hosted by David, The Skeptics Kaddish.
The Poet of the Week, the illustrious D. Avery, challenges us to write a Fib.
What is a fib? I don’t have a clue (and never told one in my life)🤞
My poem, Around and Around is the first fib I’ve ever written. 😵💫
Around and Around
![](https://lesleyscoble.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/06/img_8017.jpeg)
Round
Round
Around
and around
Spiralling downward
To the dreaded dark dank dungeon.
Lesley Scoble, June 2024
Time-lapse video (20 secs) of sketching the spiral staircase
Some spiral snaps…
I enjoy a wander down a castle’s stone spiral stairs.
![](https://lesleyscoble.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/06/img_8028-1003747093-e1717689737388.jpeg)
This photograph below makes me think of the shutter of my camera lens.
![](https://lesleyscoble.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/06/img_8032.jpeg?w=773)
I like the little green plants that are growing on these old spiral steps.
![](https://lesleyscoble.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/06/img_8035.jpeg?w=575)
…and just to bring us up to date, here are a couple of modern day spiral staircases… and a pastry I ate this morning. I’m noticing spirals everywhere!
The Fib
The Fib poem is the creation of Gregory K. Pincus and is based on the Fibonacci Sequence. To learn more about the fib poetry form and Deanna’s Prompt Guidlelines click below.
Deanna’s Prompt Guidelines here
Deanna’s prompt guidelines
The Fibonacci Sequence is the series of numbers: 0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21, 34, …
This sequence gives the Golden Ratio, or divine proportion, seen in nature, art, and architecture.
- FORM: Compose a ‘Fib’ poem (created by Gregory K. Pincus), which is a six-line poem of 1,1,2,3,5,8 syllables).
VARIATIONS:
1. Write as few or as many lines as you wish, as long as your syllable count is based upon the Fibonacci Sequence (1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21, 34, 55, etc.).
2. You may write more than one stanza, repeating the amount of lines of your first stanza.
THEME: Write about a spiral; spiral shapes in nature or art, or perhaps a more figurative or metaphorical spiral.
![](https://lesleyscoble.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/06/img_8097.jpeg)
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
Thank you, Deanna for putting my head in a spiral with your fascinating prompt.
Thank you, David for hosting your motivating W3 We’ave Weekly Poetry Prompt.
Post Script
I’ve had a play and created a spiral animation just for fun! Enjoy being hypnotised. 😵💫
![](https://lesleyscoble.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/06/img_8102.gif)
Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.
50 responses to “Around and Around | a fib poem”
Have you been up the Monument at London Bridge, the steps are like that there….! And a pain au raison my favourite – and good to see the spiral in words, I had only said to David I wonder if someone would do this – I wanted to see it – wonderful 💞
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I went up the Monument steps when I was twelve and taking my cousin around town seeing the sights. When our boys were small I sat at the bottom while Andrew took them up 😂 My eldest ran up them recently to help him train for the Marathon.
Glad you like the graphic. Thanks, Suzanne 💖 xx
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Excellent drawing and poem.
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Thank you, Sadje. 💖 xx
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You’re welcome ☺️
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💖xxx
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Down
Down
Dark Scared
Petrified
Of that which awaits
To take advantage of my fears
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Sounds like a collab to me, Matt. 😁❤️
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Yeah i sometimes feel the urge to do that in the comments section
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We should do another one sometime…
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Ok send me an idea
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🫣😆
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The wall / top of the stairs in the black and white photo look like an octopus arm.
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😵💫🐙 it do a bit, don’t it?
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It do.🐙
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Interesting form, and those stairs are dizzying!
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A mathematical form, Paul. I knew I should pay more attention to maths! I love dizzy spiral staircases. 😵💫
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Yes, I love fibonacci , but I too didn’t bother with maths. 🙂
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I’ve always had a problem with numbers 😵💫
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🙂 Me too, hated them, I’ve made a an entente cordial with them – it’s shaky.
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😁 You are my soul mate 😁
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A fabulous poem and video, Leslie. What fun to watch the spiral take shape. 💚
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Thank you, Robbie ☺️💖 xx
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Well done Lesley! I love and appreciate the amount of work you put into your posts, artwork and research. Great job!!
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Thank you so much, Suzette ☺️🌹
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You are very welcome, Lesley!
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Fabulous! There is always so much to appreciate with your creative posts. 👏🏻
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Thank you, Michele! Very kind of you to say so. 🙏 ☺️ xx
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You’re very welcome, Lesley. 😊
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Loved the photos, especially the ancient one with new life growing in the cracks. And your Fib was awesome, too!
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Thank you, Heather ☺️ xxx
How’s your hand doin’?
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It’s on the mend. Graduated from cast to splint.
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Excellent! That’s good to hear. 💖
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Great photos and art (there’s definitely a dungeon at the bottom of that staircase) and I like the way you shaped your words. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe ☺️💖xx
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Lesley ~ you created a ‘concrete’ poem when you wrote yours as a spiral shape!
Excellent! 😀
Much love,
David
P.S. I think you accidentally forgot ‘line 3’ which should have two syllables, but that doesn’t detract from how wonderfully rendered your imagery and words are!
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Oops 😬 really? I’d better take a look.
Thanks for telling me. ❤️
Thank you for the compliment on my flawed fib. (I was never any good at fibbing😂 or maths)
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🙃 my compliment was no fib!
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Aw thank you so much 🙏❤️❤️❤️
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I’ve left a whole line out! 😳😱
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but you DID create an ACTUAL spiral!
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Just edited it! 😊
Now shall need to redo my concrete image 😁
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I’ve also edited the ‘concrete’ image 😁
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Can’t thank you enough for pointing out my mistake 🙏❤️
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I was debating whether I should… because I didn’t want to offend you… but I thought you’d appreciate knowing!
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I will always be grateful and never offended. I’m delighted you told me.
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I don’t know when or where my third line escaped! It was in my first draft 😂
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😜
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The visuals are amazing. I’m thinking you had fun with this prompt, and I’m glad you did and shared so much here.
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Thanks D. I went a bit down a spiralling rabbit hole with your prompt! 😵💫💖
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