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12 responses to “Tug o’ War v the Street Crane and the Full Moon: a free verse poem”

  1. Very creative! I love the ending with the moon shining in a puddle. The poor crane. I hope it finds gravity again.😉

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    1. Thank you, Tripsey 🩷🩷🩷

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  2. Haha! Love your poem.

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    1. Tee hee, thanks, Sadje 😁🙃xx

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      1. You’re welcome 😉

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  3. 😀 the perfect ending, brought the tale in poem full circle. This was very good, Lesley. 🙌🙌

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  4. I loved this humorous take! Great poem, Lesley 🙂

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    1. Thanks, Nicole 😁🤗xx

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  5. haahah; wonderful and unexpected ending 🙂

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    1. Oh thank you, John! Delighted you enjoyed it! 😁🙏

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  6. Atractivo jugueteo entre imágenes, palabras, percepciones y ese revoltijo mental que genera una lectura placentera. Recordé a Federico García Lorca y me quería subir a la grúa para volar a coger la luna, pero me la tiraste el charco y me dejaste con los pies mojados en el aire.

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  7. This is a great poem, Lesley. Such fun.

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