City Nighttime

Office windows at night | Photo©️Lesley Scoble

Lesley Scoble, February 2025


”a blackbird’s song fills the dark”

Blackbird | Digital ink©️Lesley Scoble

My thanks to Colleen Chesebro for the inspiring challenge. To find out more about the challenge and syllabic poetry, please click below.



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23 responses to “City Nighttime: a bussokusekika taiga poem”

  1. Your words painted the perfect picture.

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  2. Very cool, Lesley! I love your evocative taiga! 🖤♡🖤

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    1. Aw, thanks, Nancy, for your cool 😎 comment. Evocative! How lovely. I’ll take that. 🙇 😘

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  3. I love this so much, Lesley. Any of the syllabic forms along with images are so fun to experiment with. I love your crow. She’s a favorite of my spirit birds.

    For the Sunflower Tanka Anthology, the taiga will be a tanka and a black and white image. This is mostly for printing cost restrictions, but the more we looked at it, black and white images are also more expressive. It’s a play off of the haiga: a haiku and an image.

    Robbie and will be adding more of forms this year to the anthology, including the bussokusekika. Any form that related to the tanka will make the anthology more interesting. 💛

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    1. Oh thank you for your wonderful comment, Colleen. 🤗 Oops, should I have tried a tanka for this prompt? I can take out a line…😁 I so want to learn all the forms.

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      1. No worries. This is practice. I just didn’t want you confused when you submit to the Sunflower Tanka Anthology this autumn. 🌻

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      2. 🤗 🌻 🌼🤓🙏 That’s worth working for.

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  4. So beautiful my friend

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    1. So are you, Sadje 🥰 thank you my friend 💖

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      1. Most welcome 🤗

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  5. Brilliant Lesley. Perfect capture in picture and words …. 💞

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    1. Aw, thank you, Suzanne 🤗💖xxx

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  6. False moons–that’s a great image. (K)

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  7. The blackbird is amazing! The poem fits it like a glove!

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    1. Oh thank you so kindly 🙏 🐦‍⬛

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  8. I like this very much, Lesley

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    1. I’m so pleased. Thank you, Robbie 🌸😊

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  9. I like the theme you chose, I often wonder about those office lights at night. Loved the last line, very haunting.

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    1. Thank you so much, Heather 😊 So glad you like the last line 🐦‍⬛ I love the song of the blackbird singing in the twilight/ night.
      When I wander round the City, I often wonder at all the office lights lit in empty offices—and ponder on the waste of energy and cause of light pollution. I’m also fascinated by lit windows at dusk that reveal glimpses of life going on. All on different floors.😁 It’s like a stage set. People in different windows oblivious of each other. A mosaic.

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      1. Hopefully, an office cleaner (like me) is at work in those empty offices, so it isn’t really a waste of energy.

        This poem reminded me so much of my cleaning job. I’ve got two shifts on three days of the week in the same office tower. Sometimes I hear the sounds of the night, such as distant music, while I’m working. Very well written, Lesley!

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      2. Thank you, Dan! What a wonderful insight into the night shift of an office cleaner. I’m going to have to rewrite the poem! 😁 Nighttime is a mysterious world.
        Thanks so much for reading—and your comment.🙏💖

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  10. Such an evocative write, Lesley. Staying in a city, I have often wondered who works late at night.

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