I wrote my poem Fired in response to the W3 Prompt #154, where the amazing Poet-of-the week Violet Lentz challenges us to write a difficult conversation. Here are Violet’s guidelines:

A Difficult Conversation

Two voices. Two perspectives. Tension lingers in the air.

Can they find common ground? Will the conversation spark understanding or fracture further?

You decide.

Write a poem—any form, or none at all—that captures the heart of a difficult conversation.

Fired

Based on a true story

You’re fired | Digital ink drawing©️Lesley Scoble

NOTES

The poem draws inspiration from a true story from my youth, when I briefly worked for Air India at their offices in the City, near Bank. My employment lasted a whole week! Apparently, I disarranged their files so thoroughly that it caused significant problems, and I was duly sacked.

THANKS
Enormous thanks to Violet for her inspiring prompt.
My thanks as always to David, The Skeptics Kaddish. To find out more about his poetry prompts please follow the link below:



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26 responses to “Fired: a difficult conversation in free verse”

  1. A youthful blow against the machine?

    I enjoyed the steady build-up to the sting-in-the-tail ending.

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    1. Thanks, Stonehead. 🙏 I had nothing against Air India and didn’t intend to sabotage their filing system. Honest 😉

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  2. This was a delight, and quite what I had in mind for the prompt. So now I have to know, was the misfiling intentional? Did freedom just taste that much sweeter than pocket money?

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    1. Thank you 🙏 and thank you so much for the prompt, Violet. 😊🩷 I tried hard at the job, but I’m just hopeless at filing and being told what to do 😂

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  3. Freedom feels so good.

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    1. Oh, it so does, Sadje 😁🩷

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  4. Oh, those first days on a new job feeling totally lost at sea. I remember that feeling. Great story with an unexpected happy ending.

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    1. Thanks, Nancy! 😊🙏🤗

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  5. that she was happy in the end made me smile. Nice story telling.

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    1. Thank you dear Selma 🤗

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  6. Oh my! This is a wonderful “fly on the wall” perspective! Sorry that you didn’t last at that job but there is often a silver lining…

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    1. 😁 Thank you, Muri! It just wasn’t the right place for me. It shocked me getting the sack 😱 but the best thing that ever happened.

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      1. That’s often the way it happens – a blessing in disguise!!

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  7. Oh Lesley, I absolutely hated filing in my first job, I would much have preferred the freedom but think my mum would’ve killed me 😂 Made for a great poem years later too 💞Suzanne

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    1. 😂 Poets can’t file. My parents were very understanding. I was upset and embarrassed at getting the sack—but delighted to be outta there!

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  8. One week! Hardly enough time and training, me thinks! I loved the ending though!!

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    1. 😁 Thanks Heather. I agree! They should have trained me. However, I’m useless at filing. The week felt like a year!
      They also didn’t like me asking why I had to be in the office at 8 am when there was no work to do until 9 am.

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      1. Oh, they wanted someone who doesn’t think! Well, their loss, the world’s gain as your talents lay elsewhere.

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      2. haha! Thanks, Heather 🤗xx

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  9. Lesley, the ending caught me off guard—in the best way—turning a harsh moment into something oddly triumphant.

    ~David

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    1. So pleased to catch you off guard, David! 😁 I thank you 🙇‍♀️

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    1. Thank you, Rupali 🤗

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