I wrote Ebb and Flow 2 in response to the W3 Poet-of-the-Week, Suzanne Brace’s prompt to create a waltz wave poem on the theme of Strength and Vulnerability. I love this poetry form!

I hope you enjoy my waltz wave poem on the theme of strength and vulnerability.

Ebb and Flow 2

The Lizard, Cornwall | Original etching©️Lesley Scoble
           ebb
and flow
ebb
and flow
against hard rock
smoothing
stone
wearing
rock away
ebbing flowing
back and forth
moving
in-
-exor-
-ably on
flowing
on
and on
and

Lesley Scoble, May 2025


The Waltz Wave

The Waltz Wave is a single stanza poem of 19 lines, with each line having a set number of syllables. The syllabic pattern is: 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1.

Leo Waltz is credited with creating the Waltz Wave poetry form, which is known for its rhythmic, flowing structure.

Acknowledgements

Enormous thanks to Suzanne for her inspiring poetry prompt.
My undying gratitude to David, The Skeptics Kaddish, for his encouragement and motivation.
My heartfelt gratitude to you, the reader, for taking time to read my poem.

To find out more about the W3 Poetry Prompt, please follow the link below.


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30 responses to “Ebb and Flow 2: a waltz wave poem”

  1. Nicely done Lesley

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  2. Lesley, I love how the shape of the poem mirrors flowing water. The ebb and flow in both form and content really bring out the theme of strength in vulnerability. Beautiful work!

    ~David

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    1. I’m really chuffed by your words, David ☺️ Thank you 🤗🤗🤗

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      1. Chuffed is my favorite non-American English word!

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      2. 😁 I love feeling chuffed!

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  3. Oh, I love this! I echo David’s comment above. Very cool.

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  4. Whoaaa..you nailed this one form Lesley 🫶

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    1. Oh thank you, Mich ☺️🙏🩷xxx

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  5. What a beautiful feel and visual you put together with these words, Leslie.

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    1. Thank you so much, Violet 🤗🩷

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  6. Lesley. You’re in the zone. Like water, it flows to the gentle waltz. Beautiful.

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    1. Oh thank you so much, Selma ☺️🩷 for your lovely compliment 🤗

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  7. Lesley, to me your waltz wave flows in every possible way, and waves never come alone, let’s have a 3, and 4 …. I love the repetition, it has a strong impact, and using the shape at the end as it nears its vulnerable end to fade out – I bet we all are saying yet another ‘on’ in our head, we just can’t help but follow…. lovely,

    💞Suzanne

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    1. Thank you so very much, Suzanne. 🙏🩷 I’m delighted you appreciate the unsaid ☺️
      No. 3 coming up! 😁Thank you also for the prompt (I enjoy waltz waves) xxx

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      1. I look forward to it…. I also enjoy them, a first for me writing them, but I can feel more building too… real little waves of feeling, and so many of them … 💞 xx

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      2. Wonderful. I look forward to reading them xxxxx

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  8. Lesley you captured the strength of the water in the coming in and the vulnerability of it going out! A beautiful poem of the cycles of strength and weakness we all experience!

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    1. Thank you so much, Muri. I love how you interpreted it 🌊🙏

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  9. This feels like the ocean. Unfinished in a majestic way.

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  10. I like the presentation too. Nice write.

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    1. Thank you, tenzenmen. ☺️🙏

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  11. It has the rhythmic quality of the water lapping at the cliffs edge. Nicely done.

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    1. Thank you, Heather 🌊🙏

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  12. Beautifully done – and I love the ending that leaves an unspoken continuation.

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    1. Thank you so much, writingwhatnots ☺️ I’m really happy you like the ending. 🙏

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  13. hi, Lesley 😄

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by li’l ol’ me, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/05/14/w3-prompt-159-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

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