The inspiration for my poem, The Black Cat, came from Sadje’s #Whatdoyousee #239 poetry prompt. Where she challenges us to write something inspired by the image of a cat (shown below).
The Black Cat
A black cat stared at me from the wall,
Both eyes were odd,
He stared as though he were some crazed urban god,
One ear was short, the other long,
At first glance this cat appeared all wrong.
I turned to leave but he lashed his long-striped tail,
The whip of which caught me round my neck.
By heck! I had no chance!
No time to think or quick react.
My legs went weak, and I was going to fall,
If truth be known, as a matter of fact,
I was much afeared,
The tail tightened its grip,
I was in its clasp,
My eyes bulged and with one last gasp,
I disappeared.
~
Lesley Clare Scoble, May 2024
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
Thank you, Sadje, for this inspiring #WDYS prompt.
Photo credit: Jon Tyson
Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.
28 responses to “The Black Cat: a free verse poem”
A very dangerous black cat it appears to be. I enjoyed this poem very much Lesley. Thanks for joining in
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Automatic reply: I’m sorry I can’t reply to your wonderful comment right now—because I’ve disappeared 😂
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Lol! Hope it’s just temporary 😻
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Out of the office till Monday. 🐈⬛
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Cool. Enjoy my friend
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😊xx
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🥰
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Wow, this is one black cat best avoided on a dark staircase. Thanks, Lesley.
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Haha! meow 🐈⬛
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Wow Lesley. An amazing poem about a black cat. The black cat’s ear was short and the other long, wow, really?😂😂😂
Anyways, black cats are odd because they are black and dangerous. I really am not a cat person, sorry🙌
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Thank you, Mthobisi, for your great comment. My apologies for only just seeing it. 🐈⬛ I much appreciate it. 🙏💞
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It is not a problem Lesley, we can all be preoccupied with our time and get busy. Thanks for responding⭐🙏
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😀Alright!!! I understand
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What a fantastic ode to the unusual black cat. Loved this, Lesley. Well done.
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Thank you so much, Mason. 🙏😊💞
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Now you’ve got me worried! Are you still there?
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Automated response: Lesley will get back to you as soon as (if) she reappears. She thanks you for your comment. 🙏
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🤣🩵
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😂❤️
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Well done, black cat!!
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Wow. It’s good to know the black cat has one friend, at least. 🐈⬛
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A brilliant take on the prompt, we are really going to miss you!
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Haha! Thanks, Keith! 😂
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Gato guandú extraño sueño.
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¡Un sueño muy extraño! Gracias por leerlo, Guillegalo. 🙏🐈⬛
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Heck! When you do appear again, please do share with us your catworldly experience!
Lesley, this is brilliant! 👋🏼👋🏼👋🏼😂😂
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Haha! Thanks, Punam! 😁 I’ve reappeared but in a strange form. Never to be the same again. 😂
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You are welcome, Lesley. 😅
Change is always good. 😂
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