Writing an ode is new for me. William Wordsworth favoured the Pindaric form (Well, if it’s good enough for him, it’s good enough for me! I’ll try it!).
I heard somewhere that it’s possible to write an ode without knowing it’s an ode. Can this be true? Who knows, I may compose my poem ODE TO THE SEA AND A BUTTERFLY in the Pindaric style from sheer luck!
Ode To The Sea And A Butterfly
The Ode To The Sea And A Butterfly is about nature's healing power. It can be a source of solace and salvation.

Atop the exalted cliff of Beachy Head Melancholia looms at the edge Sadness stands still in my stead Sorrow stares Watching from a ledge Unseeing. Salt tears flow from deep wells in my eyes The weeping ocean far below swells and sighs Seagulls rest on the crest of rolling waves that rise and fall Then all at once a seagull flies and cries the seafarers call Its wings backlit by shining sun and cerulean skies Skimming low along undulating courses Of ebb and flow and galloping white horses. I never saw anything as magnificent as thee Oh, deep mysterious wondrous sea A butterfly flits and lands upon my knee! Alike opening doors to let in light It opens wide its angel fairy wings And stays a while; Then in soft breath it flutters off in gentle flight. A black crow caws, a linnet sings I brave a smile And clasp my hands in newfound delight. I sniff a wafting whiff of heathland sedge and pause to think on the high grassy edge. I turn from the brink of the mourning bourn to take one last yearning view of thee Thou the sea will see me again Until then, Farewell O, deep mysterious wondrous sea. Away I tread from Beachy Head.
Lesley Scoble September 2022
My thanks to Deepthy for coming up with a most challenging poetry prompt for W3 Prompt: “Write an Ode to a thought or idea that influenced your life and character. This can be the time you gave up something, chose your career, picked up a certain book, etc.” My thanks also go to David Ben Alexander for encouraging me.
A little bit about ode poetry
Ode is a late 16th century word originating from French, late Latin and from the Greek ōidē. The ancient Greek aoidē meaning ‘song’, and aeidein meaning ‘sing’. An Ode is a lyrical poem that was performed accompanied by music in ancient Greece. The Romantic poets such as John Keats and William Wordsworth liked this form of poetry.
There are three specific types of Ode:
- They named the Pindaric after the ancient Greek poet Pindar. It is a theatrical ceremonial type of ode in a choral form (How good would that be to have a whole choir singing your ode?).
- The Horatian, named after the Roman poet Horace. It is a tranquil and contemplative type of ode.
- The Irregular form is… umm 🤔 (I need to look into this. I suppose it should be irregular? From what I’ve read, it is… hmm 🤔 To be honest, I don’t have a clue! It is something for me to look into!).
*Beachy Head is a place of outstanding beauty in Sussex, on the South Coast of England. The high cliff is a notorious spot for suicide.
13 responses to “Ode To The Sea And A Butterfly”
Lesley – this is a minor thing, I guess, but I love your use of the exclamation mark when you introduce the butterfly – that really made me smile – I felt your excitement!
❤
David
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🦋💕
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That’s an interesting observation about the exclamation mark, David! I try to avoid using exclamations! I put this one in, took it out, put it in, took it out, then put it back in!!!!
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I try to use them sparingly too, Lesley – but this one works! It made me smile 🙂
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Smiling is good 😊
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Fantastic ode, Lesley ! I think that it would make a nice choral piece.
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Thank you Tanmay 😊🎶
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I absolutely love the image your words paint and the story it tells. Gorgeous ode!❣️
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Thank you! I found this difficult and hoped it was an ode. It needed more time to work on…It’s a form I now want to study further💕 Thank you for the challenge! 😊
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My pleasure! I found it be a splendid ode – it reads so well!
Yay! Me too! I’ve yet to write one of my own.
My pleasure! Thank you for sharing!💗
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Hi, Lesley ❤
I just want to let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by Steven S. Wallace, is live!
Much love!
David
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Thank you David 💕
Hope I get the time this week to write—as it looks like this challenge needs brains!
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