The Walled Garden Gate is written for Sadje’s What do you see? weekly prompt. The #158 prompt is to write something inspired by this photo by Mick Haupt.

The Walled Garden Gate is Open

by Lesley Scoble


Oh! The walled garden gate is open.
I want to go in there and visit—
but…

Why is the walled garden gate open?
It is never open, is it?
Is it?

I want to enter—
adventure
into there—
but…

Hey! what does it cost?
Do I dare?
Go there—
get lost?

Be bold!
All told,
the threshold is easy to cross —
just step through—
but…

What shall I do?
I’m not allowed.
I’m scared,
at a loss,
and cowed herein,
to go
so far…
in.

Wherefore is it open?
Why’s it ajar?

It invites
With a promise
of sweet smelling herbs—
such as lavender,
evening primrose, and anise.
It is a lure
that perturbs
me to plea:
How can I be sure?
The walled garden door
is open for me?

I want to pass
through the garden wall
without doubt and fear—
and see
all that is hid.

But…

Will I Disappear?—
Like the other kids did?


Lesley Scoble October 2022

My thanks to Sadje #What Do You See for the photo prompt that sparked the inspiration for this poem!

Herstmonceux Castle, Sussex. October 2022


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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2 responses to “The Walled Garden Gate is Open: a poem in free verse”

  1. An intriguing poem Lesley. The walled garden of your photos seems quite similar to this one. Thanks for joining in.

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    1. Thank you Sadje,
      Thanks for having me 😊

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