The Cold Moon in the Night-sky of 10th December, 2022: a rhyme (of sorts) and haiku is my response to Weaβve W3 poetry prompt.
The Poet of the Week (PoW) for Skeptic Kaddish Prompt #32 is Britta Benson of Odds and Ends Poetry. Brittaβs prompt guidelines β’Write a poem, any length, any style; β’The title of your poem must be a date, including day, month and year; β’Your date can be in the past, the future, or, simply the date on which you are composing your poem; β’Fictional/speculative dates
This prompt is not an easy one for me. Mention dates and too many historical moments flash into my mind. The prompt was daunting, and dates overwhelmed. I thought I was going to give up. However, walking home on the evening of the 9th December 2022, I saw the brightest moon shining my way along the Thames river bank. Iβve attempted to write a poem butβ¦ it remains to be seen.
The Cold Moon, Saturday 10th December, 2022
I canβt think of anything to rhyme With a date, a day, a month and a year. I fear, I donβt have the time! To think of anyβ Days, months, dates?βthere are so many! Are there any I can write about? In deepest history? and steepest mystery. So many Dates for wines, whiskies and stout; Birthdays, weddings, funerals. Politics and kings. And lots of other things. There is the Battle of Hastings in 1066 King Harold got an arrow in his eye. Oh, my! What a horrid way to die. The Great fire of London in 1666 When the city burned down Homes cindered all about town. Battles, wars, plague. Blurred, confused, vague. Times, dates, months, years. epochs, aeons, periods, eras. Todayβs date is December, tenth. The Cold Moon is at its zenith. Shall I write rhymes about that instead? Forget the other times and dates whirling round my head? Yes! That is what Iβll do. I will write a haiku. β¦ A bright Cold Moon shines moonbeams shivering adieu twenty, twenty two Lesley Scoble December 2022

The Cold Moon 8th December 2022 | PhotoΒ©οΈLesley Scoble
The Cold Moon
The December full moon, known as the Cold Moon, reached its fullness, its zenith over London on the early morning of Thursday the 8th December 2022. I wrote its zenith was on the tenth. You agree that the tenth rhymes well with zenith (if you swallow the i syllable) better than the eighth? Poetic license makes no apology for this particular minutiae chronological shift.
Other chill names for the Cold Moon are:
- The Frost Exploding Trees Moon
- Moon of the Popping Trees
- Hoar Frost Moon
- Snow Moon
- Winter Maker Moon
- Long Night Moon
If you didnβt already know this moon shines in the depth of winter, these names might give you a clue.
Mars
In my photo, the Cold Moon shined on me on my way home on the evening of the tenth of December. Look close-up at the image. The moon has a bright Mars to its right (at 1 Oβclock position).
Mars is at its closest to Earth this month. Get outside and look! Itβs only 50.6 million miles (81.5 million kilometres) away! The next time you will see it so close will be January 12th, 2025.

My thanks to David of the Skeptics Kaddish and to PoW Britta Benson of Odds and Ends Poetry Blog for her prompt.
29 responses to “The Cold Moon in the Night-sky of 10th December, 2022: a rhyme (of sorts) and haiku”
haha! a twofer! you’re spoiling us, Lesley – I love how one poem serves as an intro to the second π
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π Just shows I didnβt know what to do!
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*hug* you’re much too humble π
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Youβve written so well Lesley.
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Thank you Sadje! You are very kind πππ
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My pleasure
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I enjoyed reading your latest evening stroll…putting myself there. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talent. Our Solar System is an enchanting place. We sail over half a million miles per hour at the outer edge of the Milky Way Galaxy…surrounded by the Kyber Belt. As if nothing from the chaos of the universe is allowed to enter.
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Thank you so much, Audi πβ€οΈπ
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Clever wit and rhyme
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Thank you so much, Paul!ππ
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My pleasure π
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Wow!! This is brilliant. π
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Thank you Kittyverses! Great compliment πππΉ
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You are welcome. π
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I saw the Cold Moon and Mars too. Quite a nice cosmic sendoff for 2022, as is your response to the prompt! Thanks for sharing this double poem with bonus image.
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Thank you Britta ππ Your prompt gave me much to think aboutβIβm glad I didnβt give up πΉ
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I was thoroughly amused by the first part and awe struck by the second! Loved this combination poem!!
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Thank you murisopsis! π
Thank you very much for your use of the word awe struck π Made my day β€οΈ Haiku is new for me πΉ
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Isn’t it funny how writing about not having a clue what to write about is just the trick for getting the job done. That haiku was hard earned! A fun two-fer for sure.
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Yes! Youβre right. I just wrote the thought process as I went along. Searching. π I nearly gave up. Iβm gaining a great interest in Haiku.
Thank you so much for your comment ππΉ
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I think you went above and beyond on the prompt. Wow! Great writing. π
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A beautiful write, Lesley and a double treat for your readers. πβ€οΈ
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βΊοΈ Thank you so much! β€οΈβ€οΈ this means a lot to me π
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hi, Lesley! I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by l’il ol’ me, is now live!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/12/14/w3-prompt-33-weave-written-weekly/
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Brilliant, David! ππΉ
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