Ebb and Flow

Video©️Lesley Scoble
Ebb
and flow
the
waters
go waving
ripples
rip		 
ripple		
rippling
serpentining	
with the tide
swirling
     curves
curling
side-by-side
   undu-
            lat-
                   tory
     calm



Lesley Scoble,  June 2023

Play the audio and listen to the flowing, rippling, soothing, mesmerising, meditative, calming water… Watch the video… Read the poem at a slo-w and tran-quil pace. Go with the flow, nice and sl-ow. Why not meditate? (or not).

I wrote Ebb and Flow in the Waltz Wave Poetry Form as I believe the form lends itself to slow, calm verse. The syllabic pattern is: 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1. It is a single stanza poem of 19 lines, with each line having a set number of syllables. 
With the lines being so short, they make the poem form a long, slender, vertical shape. Like a narrow, slow-flowing stream. This form lends itself to best expressing a calm, trickling cascade… 

This poetry form is the creation of Leo Waltz, of the independent art and writing magazine, Sol. I suppose one might say he put his ‘Art and Sol’ into it (forgive me, but I enjoy the occasional pun).

Originally written for #30DaysWild The Wildlife Trusts 🌱 #thewildness Day 5: To describe a peaceful moment spent observing a body of water.


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in schools); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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27 responses to “Ebb and Flow: a waltz wave poem”

  1. So beautifully written Lesley.

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    1. Thank you, Sadje, for this supreme compliment 🙏😊💗

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  2. So calming, and beautifully written!

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    1. Thank you Chu,
      I appreciate your compliment so much 🩵

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  3. Thank you, Lesley. Truly calming. And you have an awesome resume. (can’t put accent marks with this keyboard 😦 )

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  4. wow… (whisper wow😁) this is stunning, Lesley. so enjoyed 🤍🙏

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  5. Go with the flow is my daily mantra, …and you totally nailed it Lesley, …I’m so mellowed out now, I’m floating,…✨👏✨🦋✨

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    1. Wow, thank you, Pennsivity, 🙏
      You can’t beat a good calm float 😊🌸💗

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      1. floating right now, , Lesley, .need it, waiting in for a delivery, …calm, stay calm, …have a great Tuesday, ✨🦋✨

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      2. You too 💧keep afloat 🩵

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    1. Thank you, Jennifer 🌸 Glad you find it so 😊🙏💖 Calm is good

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  6. Love it 😊 👏🏽

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    1. Thank you Selma 💗😊🙏

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  7. The poem is beautiful, and I loved the pun. I’m a punny girl.

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    1. Thank you Nicole 😊🙏
      😁 pun? what pun? 😁

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  8. Mmmm. So relaxing!
    I feel myself drifting away.
    This is masterful, Lesley!

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    1. Ah, feel free to cast yourself adrift, Na-n-cy,
      As long as you’re back in time to write your next story 😊
      Thank you for the use of the word, “masterful”. I like that word ☺️a lot!

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      1. Oh, my pleasure, Lesley!
        I feel like I should be saying “Calgon! Take me away!”
        Remember those old adverts?? 😂 🛀🏼

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  9. A beautifully lyrical and beautiful written poem, serpentining…curves
    curling
    side-by-side
    undu-
    lat-
    tory
    calm

    I love the use of sound, The steady waves of alliteration that rise and fall. They mirror the rise and fall of the sea.

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    1. Thank you, Eugenia 🙏 I appreciate your lovely compliment 😊

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  10. That is beautiful especially with the water sound in the background! So glad you included it.

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    1. Thank you so much 😊☔️
      very glad you liked it. 🌧️

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    1. Thank you Amihai 🙏🩵

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