David, of W3 We’ave Weekly Poetry Prompt the Poet of the Week this week, and he invites us to write a Dormasha. What’s a dormasha? It’s a nonce poem invented by David himself and Sangeetha. Here are the guidelines.

I enjoyed this new poetry form. I liken its structure to that of playing different chord conversions in music. I wrote It Cometh thinking of the three syllabic lines as chord triads, and the seven syllabic lines as a seventh chord, and so on. 

A crow cawing loud, ergo Breaks the reverie | Digital oil painting©️Lesley Scoble


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright, (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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31 responses to “It Cometh: a dormasha”

  1. “Stepping on the crunch of death”

    I really like this line. I like your poem.❤️🍂

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    1. 😊 Thank you very much, Melissa. 🧡 🍂 Autumn leaves crunch when you walk on them, don’t they?
      (sorry I don’t have time to do your fandango this week ☹️).

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      1. No worries! Whenever you can and you feel like it, you are welcome to join.🤗❤️

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      2. I didn’t write anything for my own prompt this week.😅 I didn’t have time either.

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  2. Lesley, this poem floors me. You’ve made the dormasha sing.

    ~David

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    1. Ooo, thank you, David. 🎶 I enjoyed it. Thanks for introducing me to this form. Clever you and Sangeetha for creating it. 👏❤️

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      1. That’s how we roll! 🧻

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      2. Now you make me flush. ☺️

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      3. LOL!

        You are so good!!

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      4. Lesley,

        This week’s W3, hosted by the delightful Suzanne Brace, is now live!

        W3 Prompt #78: Wea’ve Written Weekly

        Enjoy 🙂

        Much love,
        David

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      5. Ta, David 🙏💓😊

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  3. I love this one! The ending is so wonderful harkening back to a father using a broom to “sweep” the monsters out from under the bed!! The archer repels the unknown with a random arrow!!! Brilliant!

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    1. Enormous thank you, Muri. 🙏😊💓 I enjoyed the challenge of this poetry form.
      How wonderful sweeping away monsters from under the bed. ❤️ Perfect dad.
      (I love the brilliant word) 😁 I’m now a happy bunny. 🐰 xx

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  4. What a lovely poem Lesley. Had a very Shakespearean feel to it.

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    1. Forsooth, I thank thee, Sadje. 😆💗

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      1. You’re most welcome 🥹😉

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  5. The old world dialogue fit the form so well. You brought the painting to life.

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  6. Using the essence of Fall to make this poem hum a tune… Great writing Lesley. Verse two drew me in to the setting and the energy…(sigh).. top notch writing. 👏👏💙

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    1. A million thanks, Nigel 🙏💗 for this wonderful compliment 🌹

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      1. Welcome Lesley. 🙏

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  7. This poem is very entertaining, Lesley, and I love the painting.

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    1. Thank you, Roberta! 😊❤️🙏

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  8. Lovely poem, and the image is intriguing, is it you painting?

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    1. Thank you, Elizabeth. 😊
      Yes, the painting is mine. I painted it on my iPad in the painting apps ArtSet and Procreate. I appreciate your comment very much. 🙏

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  9. Much enjoyable, thanks.

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    1. Thank you, MsHazyBrain! 🙏💓

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