Heather Carr-Rowe (sgeoil) is the Poet of the Week for the W3 Prompt #95. Her prompt guidelines are to employ personification and write a poem from an object’s point of view. In response, I wrote a poem about a broken mandolin.

The Broken Mandolin | Digital pencil©️Lesley Scoble


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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39 responses to “The Broken Mandolin: a free verse poem”

  1. Aww, poor mandolin. Well written Lesley.

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    1. Thank you, Sadje 🎵🙏💗

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      1. You’re always welcome

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  2. Love this, great poem as always
    💞Suzanne

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    1. Suzanne, Thank you so much 😊💕

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  3. The poem really made me feel for the mandolin! I hope someone fixes it, Lesley ❤️

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    1. 😁 Thanks, Aboli. I took it to the luthier’s yesterday. 😁🎵

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  4. Lesley, I love these feelings of silent longing and abandonment of the broken mandolin… Your poem evokes deep emotions!

    ~David

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    1. David, thank you! 🙏☺️

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      1. Lesley 👋🏻

        I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by Lorraine Lewis (blindzanygirl) is now live ~ hooray!

        https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/02/28/w3-prompt-96-weave-written-weekly/

        Enjoy 😀

        Much love,
        David

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      2. Thank you as always, David 🙏💗

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  5. Great poem, and I enjoyed the time lapse video. You are so talented!

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    1. Thank you, Willa! ☺️❤️
      Time-lapse videos are fun, aren’t they? xx

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  6. Perhaps someone will give it a new home! Instruments need someone to play them to give them life. (K)

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  7. folk songs as old as Noah’s ark? Wow.. lol.

    but this is such a sad poem that resonates with me. Some days I feel like a broken mandolin. Well done, Lesley 💜🙏👏👏

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    1. Thanks, Nigel 😊🙏
      As long as you don’t linger in a cardboard box, that’s fine. I feel like a broken mandolin today. I’m painting and decorating and going up and down ladders all day. It’s doing me in.
      I’ll swap my sad poem for your happy one, Nigel! Lol

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      1. Consider it done. I’ve had a long week. And it has sucked the joy out of my life so being able to engage with creative souls and get some writing done, feels heavenly. Imma send some positive energy your way, Lesley. 🔥🔥🥰🤗🎉🎉

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      2. Oooh, thanks, Nigel. I love swaps. 😊
        Thanks for the energy vibes—I shall now transcend up the ladder instead of grumping up it. 😁

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      3. I’m sending some happ friday vibes your way. 🤓❤️

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  8. This made me so sad for the mandolin! My son asked for a mandolin once -because it is tuned the same as a violin… I hope this mandolin is repaired and once more is able to sing!!

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    1. Thanks, Muri 💕
      It is my favourite mandolin. I took it to the luthier and he made it sing again… until, I left it exposed in very hot sunshine when we went away. The heat distorted it somewhere and now it groans. I shall take it to the luthier soon, but fear the worst. 😢
      I agree with your son, the mandolin is great because it’s the same as a violin ❤️

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    2. Thank you for your empathy and compassion 💗

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  9. The poor abandoned mandolin. I really feel for him (I mean, it…?)!

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    1. The mandolin thanks you for your kind empathy 🙏😊😁
      Thank you, Words ‘n ☕️❤️

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  10. Oh, I feel bereft for the mandolin. I do hope she will sing again. Your time lapse video is a wonderful addition. You are so multi-talented!

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    1. Gosh, thank you, Heather! 😊💗
      It is sad when an instrument can’t play anymore. Your prompt is to blame. 😁 I looked around for an object to write about, and my eyes fell upon my lovely old (broken) mandolin…

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      1. I think your mandolin was a good choice. It certainly deserved(s) to have its say!

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  11. Great job with this. I almost feel bad for that poor little mandolin!

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    1. Aw, thanks, Christine. 🎶🩷🎶

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  12. Lesley, this is lovely. Wonderful for the prompt. Made me nostalgic for the poor instrument.

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    1. Aw, thank you 🙏 🎶

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