Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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28 responses to “The Night Train: a limerick”

  1. This is a very interesting take of the prompt Lesley😊

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    1. Thanks, Mich. I wanted it to be funny, but it turned darker. 😁💕

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      1. 🤭🤭 yeah..but i love it

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      2. Brill! 🙏☺️😁 As Leonard Cohen would say, I want it darker. 🖤

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  2. Great limerick, Lesley. 🙂

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    1. Ooo, thanks ever so, Kitty 😊💕🙏

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  3. keeping this in mind, Lesley….and an eye for those seats lol…🤭
    a great limerick 🤍

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    1. Tee hee, Thanks, Destiny 💗

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  4. Uhm… wow. That was unexpected. Well done, Lesley!

    ~David

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    1. Cursed, spooky seats. 😁
      Thanks, David 🙏💕

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  5. Dark is a perspective. At times, such rumours are spread to keep people away.

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  6. Blimey, that’s scary! I’ll be careful where I sit on the underground from now on.
    Perhaps, I’ve already sat on those seats. 😮
    😀

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    1. 😂🤣 Who knows…? 😂

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  7. Oh no! Very scary seats

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    1. haha! Don’t sit in them whatever you do, Sadje! 😁

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      1. After reading this story, I won’t. 😂

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  8. 😨 jinxed train seats! Gotta be careful!

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    1. 😂 Yes, indeed. They look innocuous, but…

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  9. Perhaps I sat on this train.😬

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  10. A limerick that has gone off the rails!

    However, I might change one word in this line. What do you think?

    For they lost their mind and [to] their id,

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    1. Thanks for your suggestion, Alan. I think the added [to] might be unnecessary as the line refers to their id (their psyche).
      I appreciate your comment 🙏❤️ Many thanks.

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    1. Thanks so much, Robbie 😊

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