I wrote my poem, Border Line in response to Melissa’s #FFFC Prompt.


Lesley lives in the City of London Square Mile. An artist, actor and sculptor (her first ceramic sculpture won the V&A inspired by… Award). Scenic artist & book illustrator, playwright (her musical play, Rapscallion performed in inner city schools and theatre school); TV dancer; Animator and illustrator for TV production. Set up Pinecone Studios Ltd and IIMSI Ltd drama and filmmaking workshops in London – producing award-winning films made by children.


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30 responses to “Border Line: a free verse poem”

  1. A protest against the on-going riots? It’s a great poem 🌺

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    1. Thank you so much, Robbie 🙏🩷

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  2. Nice sarcastic tone which would probably be lost on the ones who put up the sign.

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    1. Thanks, Heather. 🙏💞

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  3. Well written Lesley… 👏. I look at the shape of your poem and see a candlestick holder ….? To hold the light … or am I seeing too much..? 💞

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    1. Thank you, Suzanne! I didn’t like the look of it when the text was straight—I preferred this central shape—so that must be why! 😆 🕯️ Of course I designed it that way, ahem 😉 Thank you for seeing it 🩷 Means much. 🙏 xx

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      1. I love it, take the credit and the symbolism fits the message … 💞

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  4. I enjoyed your satirical take on the prompt, especially

    “This is natures ground,
    God’s green Earth,
    it’s ours by right,
    by right of birth.
    and we own it”

    Humans do think very much of themselves.

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    1. Thanks, Trip! Your comment means a lot 🩷🩷🩷

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  5. Oh I love the satire in this poem. ❤️

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      1. Thank you 🙏😊🩷

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    1. Thank you, Aboli! 🙏😊🩷xxx

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  6. You make Woody Guthrie proud. (K)

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    1. I am extremely touched by your massive compliment. 🙏 Thank you, Kerfe 🩷🩷🩷

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  7. It’s indeed the thinking of many.

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    1. Thank you, Sadje 💞💞💞

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      1. You’re welcome ☺️

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  8. I needed to log in to comment on your blog, although I left a comment on Melissa’s.
    This is so well written..tongue in cheek, excellent wit and sacarsm. This was such a poignant commentary, Lesley. 👏💜

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    1. I’m very glad you did take the trouble to log in, Nigel. Thank you! I wonder what WordPress is up to now? 🤔 It happens on the random sometimes—and I have to log in to sites I follow.
      Big hug and thanks for your wonderful compliment, Nigel. 🤗🙏🩷

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  9. Punch in the last two lines… thanks.

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    1. Thank you, JM 🙏😊🩷

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  10. You are a wonderful expressionist more than a poet, which, of course, you are @lesleyscoble.

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    1. Thank you 🙏 for reading, and your compliment .

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      1. You’re welcome. Feel free to check out my little poems as well. 🧲🧲😋😋

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      2. I shall do. Thank you. 😊

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