Like a Dream


The sea lapping against soft golden sand…”

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33 responses to “Like a Dream: a ghazal”

  1. What a magical poem! I love how you wake up at the end. Reality bites in unexpected ways! 🧡

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    1. Thank you so much, Colleen! 🤗🙏

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  2. Beautifully done! And I loved the close!

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    1. Oh, thank you so much, Violet 😊🙏

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  3. I love how this moves so smoothly from dreamy to jolting, Lesley! That last line really lands ❤

    Much love,
    David

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  4. brilliant! as always! I always am happy when I see your linky is ready.

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    1. Oh, that’s so nice of you to say that, Artie.☺️ You certainly worked my grey cells with this one. Thank you for setting such a terrific challenge. I thought I wasn’t going to manage it! 🙏💖

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  5. I was dreaming along, by your side ….then you WOKE ME UP!

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    1. Haha! 😁👏 Thanks, Maggie! 🤓Appreciate you reading it ☺️🙏 xxx

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  6. Oh man, there’s always that one person who has to spoil everything! I could listen to the sea lapping the shore for ever. Nice write!

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    1. 😂 Thank you, Heather. The sound of sea lapping is the best thing ever… Did you listen to the audio? It can drift you off to sleep…. zzzz

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      1. I did listen to it. Just before shutting down for the night!

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      2. It’s soothing, isn’t it? 🌊

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  7. Beautiful poem and lovely, graceful form. Very nice, Lesley! ☺️

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  8. I knew you could do it!! Lovely, it definitely was – like a dream!!

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    1. Couldn’t have done it without you 🙏 😘 xxxxx

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  9. It’s just so lovely and beautiful! Thanks for sharing. 💜

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    1. Thank you so much for reading, Shreya. 🙏 I’m very pleased to meet you 🩷🌸

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  10. So good, Lesley. Perfect really. Way to go 👏🏽

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    1. Gosh, thank you, Selma! I’ve never managed perfect before☺️🤗💖xxx

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  11. Awesome ghazal Lesley

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    1. Thank you for your awesome comment, Sadje 🙏😁 I love that word 🤗

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      1. You’re most welcome 🤗

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  12. I love the twist at the end of your dreamy ghazal Lesley, but don’t you hate to be woken ….! 🤗💞

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    1. Thank you Suzanne! How very dare an employer wake me up‽ 😂🤗

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  13. This read like a beautiful dream till you screamed!! Thanks for the wake up call, Lesley. You are the best. ❤️😊

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    1. Haha! Thank you so much, Punam! 🙇‍♀️xxxxxx

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      1. My pleasure, dear. 🙇🏼‍♀️💗🤗

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