St Paul’s Cathedral, London | Digital ink sketch©️Lesley Scoble

First of all, my thanks to the Poet-of-the-week, Val, Murisposis, for “your personal creed or your spirituality” prompt. 

  • THEME: Your personal creed or your spirituality;

NOTES

a little bit of personal history




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40 responses to “I sometimes… : a free verse poem”

  1. Lesley, your poem is so full of humor and introspection—truly engaging. I especially love the casual, thoughtful way you reflect on life’s experiences. And the shout-out at the end… it deeply humbles me. Thank you for your kind words; they mean a lot.

    Much, much love,

    David

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    1. Thank you, David. You mean a lot. 🙏🤗

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  2. I love your sense of humour, it adds so much to the topic. Too often we take ourselves too seriously. Your recount of your experiences in Belfast are quite shocking to someone who has lived a sheltered life here in Canada. But, it affirms some of the reasons that I have difficulty with organized religion which to me has nothing to do with spirituality.

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    1. Thank you so very much, Heather 🙏🤗❤️

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  3. I think the Belfast story does give you hope, even with all that’s going on in the world right now. I’m sure the hatred hasn’t gone away, but they do seem to have found a way to make peace work and I believe Belfast is a beautiful city now. They must have been horrible experiences. I have an elderly friend who is mentally scarred from those days. And I love your upbeat poetry, though I don’t come here often.

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    1. Hello, Restless Jo! Thanks so much for popping by. I shall visit you soon 🙏🤗xxx

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  4. HI Lesley, this is a fantastic poem. Very well done.

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    1. Thank you so much, Robbie! I’m chuffed you think so. 🙇‍♀️🩷

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  5. Such a delightful poem, Lesley. I love all the whimsey and humor about it. Wonderful write! ♡✍🏼

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    1. Oh Nancy, thank you so very much! 🙇‍♀️🙏🤗

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  6. Lesley this poetical exploration of spirituality and religious practice is something most can relate to. The human species is curious and forever seeking answers to the most difficult questions. The relaxed atmosphere in your verses makes it seem an unhurried search for the truth… Bravo for a delightful poem! As for your experiences in Belfast – wow. I’ve only read the sanitized dissection of the political/religious upheaval. You make it very real with a first hand account! 🤗😍

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    1. Thank you so much, Muri! I didn’t think I was going to be able to write to your prompt. It’s a tricky subject. It’s amazing where your prompt took me—I hadn’t thought about Belfast for years!
      Thanks again for an awesome prompt. 🙇‍♀️🩷

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      1. I’m so pleased that you gave this prompt your talent and time! It was such a difficult decision! I had narrowed it down to 6 and then agonized… If only I could have picked more than one poem/poet!!

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      2. I find being poet-of-the-week hard for that very reason, Muri. Too much brilliance in the group. 😁 I’m pretty unwell at the moment and haven’t been able to read the others yet. It’s so interesting and enlightening to read other interpretations of the same prompt.
        💖🤗L xxx

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      3. Lesley I do hope you are on the mend! I left the prompt pretty wide open so that people could run with it. There have been prompts that were fairly rigid and all the poems felt like twins separated at birth…

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      4. Being ill has been the most successful weight loss programme ever! Now got a horrid dose of flu on top of everything else. ‘Twas good having your prompt to take my mind off it. 🙏🌹🤗xxx

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      5. Yikes! The triple whammy is out there – COVID/RSV/Influenza concurrently or consecutively! Sounds like that’s what laid you low! Sending positive thoughts for a quick recovery!!

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      6. Yes, a triple whammy! Something’s out to get me! Thank you so much for your positive thoughts, kind Muri xx 🙏🩷

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      7. I’m still sending healing thoughts!! 🙏🏻💗🙏🏻

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      8. Thanks, Muri! I’ve grabbed ‘em and put them in my pocket 🙏🩷

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  7. Lesley, your poem deeply resonated with me! Whimsical, humourous but at the same time conveying a deep message. 🙇🏼‍♀️💕

    What a harrowing experience you had in Belfast. Sadly, things are equally bad here. Religious bigotry has never been as bad as it is now. 😔

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    1. Thank you, Punam, for your compliment 🙇‍♀️🩷
      I’m sad to hear that bigotry is thriving where you are. 😕 Why do people want to impose their beliefs on everyone else‽

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      1. You are very welcome, dear Lesley!💗🤗

        Beats me! 😟 Religion should be a personal choice and not a reason for prejudices.

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      2. Absolutely 🤗💖

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  8. I love the deepness and the lightness that coexists in this poem.

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    1. Thank you so much for this compliment, Nicole 🤗

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  9. Spirit is everywhere but organizing it into a coherent whole is difficult. I like the way you personalize this quandary. We have a lot of religious bigotry here in the USA from both sides of the fence. What a frightening experience you had of the visceral unreason of it.

    And yes, David is a tireless promoter of poetry and poets, to the benefit of all.

    (K)

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    1. Religious bigotry causes a lot of problems. The opposite of what religion should be about. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, Kerfe. 🙏🤗
      I owe David a lot. He deserves a trophy 🏆

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  10. This is so good Lesley

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    1. You are so kind, Sadje. Thank you 🤗🌹

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      1. Most welcome my friend

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  11. hi, Lesley 😁

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Sally, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #150: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

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  12. What a wonderful poem! I love the imagery.

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    1. I appreciate your compliment—thank you 🙏🤗💖

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