I wrote my poem “I Live by Nobody’s Rules” in response to this week’s W3 Prompt #165, where the Poet of the Week, Bob Lynn, gives us quite a challenge: to draw inspiration from his beautiful poem “What Remains,” and to explore themes of persistence, belonging, growth, or survival — and to include the exact phrase “nobody’s rules” somewhere within the text.

To read the “Seeds of Resilience” prompt guidelines, click below.

Bob’s Rules

Bob’s prompt: “Seeds of Resilience” 

Part 1: The Prompt Poem

Read and draw inspiration from Bob’s poem What Remains’.

Part 2: The Challenge

Write an original poem inspired by ‘What Remains’ that meets both of these requirements:

  1. Requirement 1: Poetic Device
    • Your poem must prominently feature metaphor as a central device. Like the dandelions in the inspiration piece, use metaphorical imagery to explore themes of persistence, belonging, growth, or survival.
  2. Requirement 2: Required Phrase
  3. Your poem must include the exact phrase “nobody’s rules” somewhere within the text. You may use it as written, or incorporate it naturally into your poem’s flow and structure.

Guidelines

  • Submit your original poem along with a brief note (2-3 sentences) explaining how your metaphor connects to the themes in “What Remains”
  • All poetic forms are welcome – from free verse to structured forms like sonnets or haikus
  • No length restrictions beyond what serves your artistic vision

Evaluation Focus

Poems will be appreciated for their creative use of metaphor, thoughtful integration of the required phrase, and how meaningfully they engage with the inspiration piece’s themes of resilience and belonging. 

I Live by Nobody’s Rules | Ink & watercolour ©️ Lesley Scoble
Lesley Scoble narrates her poem, I Live by Nobody’s Rules
I Live by Nobody’s Rules_Lyrics by Lesley Scoble_Music & singer by Suno.com

NOTES

Metaphors
The metaphors in the poem suggest that the speaker drifts like clouds and dandelion seeds—untethered and free—embodying resilience through their refusal to be confined by rules or limits. These images capture a spirit of survival, growth, and a sense of belonging on the speaker’s own terms.

THANKS
Thank you, David, for hosting your wonderful W3 Prompts for The Skeptics Kaddish.
Thank you, Bob, for your inspirational challenge!
Last, but not least, thank you, the reader, for reading my poem. 🙏

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39 responses to “I Live by Nobody’s Rules: a free verse poem (& rap song)”

  1. This is an excellent poem Lesley. I especially love the first stanza.

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    1. Oh- and the rap song is soooo good! I may even forgive the fake London accent. 🤣

      I agree – us Londoners are resilient…

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      1. Hee hee, it is cool isn’t it? 🎵I love the cockney accent—I need to practise! 😁

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      2. It is fading away. Although Estuary English is very close and is widely spoken.

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      3. They’re becoming a rare breed 💖 I’ve never heard of Estuary English before 😮

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      4. It is a new accent. Sounding like a Londoner became cool and the accent spread across south eastern England. It altered as it did so.

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    2. Thank you so much, Kim. Funny you should say that—I was tempted to leave it at just that. 🤗

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    Sorry to hear you’ve not been well lately Lesley. But this is just BRILLIANT and certainly lifted my own spirits. Dandelions are one of my favourite flowers too and in nostalgic mood here’s a haiku (monoku) I wrote today … It’s not meant to be sad just reflecting on some happier times

    wishing we’d had more time dandelion clocks 

    Love and hugs

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    1. Oh I love your monoku poem, Clive! Thank you so much for your words. 🙏 The dandelion is a precious flower. I’m delighted you love them too! 🌼

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  3. Made me smile, Lesley! I especially like this line:

    The earth is the soul of my shoes

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    1. Smiling is brilliant 😁 Now you’ve made me smile.😀 Thank you so much, Nolcha 🙏

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  4. This is brilliant Lesley and I just love the rap version it works so well 🙌who is singing it?

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    1. Oh thank you, AJ! I love the brilliant word. You are so kind 🙏🤗 delighted you enjoyed the rap—the singer is the talented and ingenious Suno.com! (AI) I’m having a lot of fun music making with them!

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      1. Sounds fantastic- I’ll have to give it a go 🙌

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      2. Link up with me if you do! I hope you find it as incredible as I do. https://suno.com/s/85UfP6qeJnfbNllN

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      3. Thanks Lesley yes I have been exploring and experimented here is mine; 😊
        https://suno.com/song/078c0ddf-bcf4-4624-931a-efe98781ede5

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      4. Wow! It’s BRILLIANT! Did you set the chorus and bridge, or did they do that? 👏 Bravo!

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      5. Hi, thankfully they somehow did the bridge and chorus – the only trouble now is I’m hooked to it 😅

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      6. Haha! Me too! Just think of all the Hits we can produce! It’s a wonderful platform for your poetry. And songs! 🎶

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  5. Lesley – what a wonderfully liberating and spirited expression of personal freedom! Your poem captures something truly beautiful about the human desire for authenticity and self-determination. The way you weave natural imagery throughout – transforming the speaker into wind, birdsong, clouds, and dandelion seeds – creates such vivid, memorable pictures that perfectly embody the feeling of being unbound. Your use of repetition is particularly effective; those returning phrases like “I live by nobody’s rules” and “I am me” create a rhythmic heartbeat that drives the message home with real conviction. The structure itself feels organic and free-flowing, which brilliantly mirrors your content. There’s something genuinely uplifting about how you balance defiance with peace – you’re not angry at the world, just confidently choosing your own path. The final lines with their spacing create such a powerful visual and emotional punch. Your voice comes through as both strong and gentle, rebellious yet at peace with nature and yourself. And bonus points for the spoken version!

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    1. Oh thank you for your wonderful comment / review, Bob. I really appreciate your words. Thank you for taking the time—it means a lot to me. Bonus points for the narration! 😁 I expected a reduction for that 😂

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  6. I really like the way you’ve entwined the human spirit with the natural world. (K)

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    1. Thank you so much, Kerfe. 🤗

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  7. Lesley I love the living free theme! It is merely a strangled whisper for many women….

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    1. Muri, I love your line ‘a strangled whisper for many women…’
      Thank you so much. 🙏

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      1. The truth coated in poetry.

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  8. Lesley, your poem is such a spirited declaration of freedom—“the earth is the soul of my shoes / and the sky is my hat” really delights me. That line in particular seems to radiate your resilient voice, full of whimsy and grit.

    I didn’t realize you were still feeling unwell—I’m really sorry to hear that. Do you need more online hugs to get through this challenging period? Because I’ve got plenty more where those came from. 💛

    ~David

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    1. Thank you, thank you, and thank you, David! I’m delighted you like that line. Your words cheer me. Yes, I’m afraid whatever’s out to get me has tried again. This time it’s a version of Covid without being Covid (If a duck quacks like a duck it could be a dog). Non stop coughing for three solid days and nights (I haven’t been popular). And yes please! A hug is just what this girl needs right now. 🤗

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      1. 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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      2. You are unbelievably kind, Maestro 🤗

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  9. You are fabulous! 👏🏻🌻 Love listening to you!

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    1. Oh thank you for reading, Michele! You are fabulous! Love listening to your comment! 🙇‍♀️💕

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  10. Yo that’s dope as a rap song 😁

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  11. “I’m like a whisper on the wind,
    a sweet birdsong in a tree,
    I can do what I want
    it don’t matter to me,
    I am me.”

    So happy you are.❤️

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