I wrote my poem Object on the Wall inspired by the Melissa’s Fandango Flash Fiction Photo Prompt #333. The image is from Nellie Adamyan on Unsplash.


by Lesley Scoble

In Britain, before smartphones, red phone boxes echoed with the clink of coins and murmured goodbyes. From A & B payphones to the STD direct-dial revolution, voices travelled through copper wires—until their present-day phase-out. STD pip signals have now been replaced by silent texts and digital pings.

In my poem (and the lighthearted song beneath it), a young observer wonders what the unusual ‘object on the wall’ might be.

Object on the Wall (inspired by the photo from Nellie Adamyan) | Digital ink & watercolour©️Lesley Scoble

Object on the Wall©️Lesley Scoble, August 2025

Hope you enjoy this fun spin on the poem—it was a joy to create!

Long before smartphones and silent texts, Britain’s streets were dotted with red phone boxes—miniature chambers of urgency, confession, and connection. From 1925 to the late 1970s, the A & B public pay phone was the standard: a mechanical ritual where callers dropped old pennies, pressed Button A to speak, or Button B to reclaim their coins if the line failed.

In 1959, a quiet revolution began. The STD (Subscriber Trunk Dialling) coin pay phone allowed direct dialling without operator assistance, ushering in a new era of automation. 

The STD payphone is the one I recall in my poem—the model that emitted those exasperating pips to signal your money was running out. If you didn’t feed more coins before the pips stopped, the line would go dead, and your call would abruptly end.

By 1971, the system had adapted to decimal currency, and by 1976, the last manual telephone exchange had closed. The A & B phones faded into memory, leaving behind their ghostly echoes in glass and steel.

Some of my iPhone snapshots showing how our local phone booths have been repurposed.

Phone Booths, Smithfield Market
A chap on his mobile close by an old phone box.
Going Wild
Phone Box, Austin Friars

THANK YOU
Thank you, Melissa Lemay, for your inspiring photo prompt.
And heartfelt thanks to you, the reader, for taking the time to read and/or listen to my poem.

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23 responses to “Object On the Wall: narrative poem in free verse (& song!)”

  1. The public pay phone has become extinct here! We don’t even have any phone booths left – now the last remaining are phones with a small roof on a post! They are almost always used as a geocache!!

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    1. Phone booths are disappearing. I remember queues at the phone boxes.

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  2. I love all the pictures of phone boxes. I’m not sure if I’m familiar with the pips.

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    1. Oh, maybe the pips were a British thing. STD pips sounded when the money ran out and your call was about to be cut off.

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      1. It’s possible that I have just forgotten.

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      2. Not an easy to understand poem then.
        For me, your prompt triggered the memory of the irritating pips.

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  3. So well done! A production all its own. I love your choice of music and your verse! Chef’s kiss! Can you believe there are people alive right now that have no idea what a payphone is? I feel so old!

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    1. Aw, thank you so much, sweet Violet ☺️
      Haha! I’m glad I’m not alone in my antiquity 💖 I shall add an historical note to the post… x

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  4. Those were the days. Not so long ago really. (K)

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  5. It’s a text that reads quickly, but it leaves a trail of tenderness for what has been lost and a spark of mystery for what we will never know.

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  6. Love your poem Lesley

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    1. Thank you so much Sadje ☺️❤️ xx

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  7. You’ve taken me back with this one Lesley those bloody pips always came too soon! Great song🎵 🙌

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    1. Thank you, AJ 🤗 They always came at the crucial moment! I never had enough coins!!!!

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  8. Funny poem, Lesley – well done!

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    1. Hey, thanks 🙏 Nolcha 😁🤗

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  9. Love the perspective you chose, which made me chuckle thinking about how strange the concept is for younger generations and remembering that urgency of needing more money. I’ve also enjoyed seeing old phone boxes when visiting overseas. Fabulous musical creation, too. Thanks Lesley! ☎️

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    1. Thank you for this smashing comment, Michele! I’m so happy you enjoyed the music too! 🙏🎶💗

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      1. Smashing! Love that and visiting your site. Thank you, Lesley! 🤩👏🏻💕

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    2. Just listened to your gorgeous reading of City Dusk. How lovely it is. I’d love to be in that park when you read it. Beautiful narration, Michele 💗

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      1. Oh, I’d love that, too! We’d have a great time! 🙌🏻 Would probably turn a bit theatrical! 🎭 Thank you so much for listening. 🥰

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      2. It was a joy 🙏 🎭 thank you!

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