The brilliant poet Michele Navajas is the Poet of the Week for the W3 Poetry Prompt #179. Michele invites us to write a Hay(na)ku series of five poems about a different aspect of love. Please click below to discover the full details.

My Hay(na)ku poems are written in the poetic form invented in 2003 by Filipino-American poet Eileen R. Tabios. Each stanza follows a simple structure: one word, two words, three words — six in total, minimalism at its best! Named after the Filipino *tagalog exclamation “Hay naku!” (“Oh my!”), the form invites succinctness!

*Tagalogs are a collection of phrases in Tagalog, an Austronesian language spoken mainly in the Philippines. For a list of Tagalog phrases visit here.

I wrote my poems (and sketched the iPad pastels) in response to Michele’s suggested list: romantic love, familial love, self-love, unrequited love, and enduring/timeless love.

The image is a digital pastel with the text of Hay(na)ku No. 1. Unrequited Love in the 5 Ways to Love series.

angst
and yearning
for a dream
Unrequited Love_hay(na)ku_digital pastel©️Lesley Scoble
The image is a digital pastel with the text of Hay(na)ku No. 2. Romantic Love in the 5 Ways to Love series.

dash
of perfume
waltz by Strauss
Romantic Love | Hay(na)ku | digital pastel©️Lesley Scoble
The image is a digital pastel with the text of Hay(na)ku No. 3. Familial (parental) Love in the 5 Ways to Love series.

worrying
waiting up
late at night
Familial (parental) Love | Hay(na)ku | digital pastel©️Lesley Scoble
The image is a digital pastel with the text of Hay(na)ku No. 4. Enduring_Timeless Love in the 5 Ways to Love series.

tea
and biscuits
in the afternoon
Enduring_Timeless Love | Hay(na)ku | Digital pastel©️Lesley Scoble
Self Love | Hay(na)ku | Digital pastel©️Lesley Scoble
5 Ways to Love©️Lesley Scoble

THANK YOU
Thank you, Mich, for your wonderful prompt — I’ve truly enjoyed the challenge.
Thank you, David of The Skeptic’s Kaddish, for your encouragement and inspiration.
And thank you, dear reader, for spending time with my poems.


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47 responses to “5 Ways to Love: Hay(na)ku (& music audio)”

  1. This is an utterly beautiful post, Lesley!

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  2. Oh, thank you so much, Nolcha! 🤗💕

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  3. What a lovely series Lesley, these should be in print and framed on a wall… 💞

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    1. Aw, Suzanne, that is such a lovely thing to say! Thank you 🙏🤗💕

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  4. This is a beautiful post. Who is doing the gorgeous singing. Wow, nicely done.

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    1. Enormous thanks, Joni 🙏 💕
      I wish I could say the singer was me! But it’s an AI interpretation of my words and orchestration input—with some editing.

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  5. It’s never just a visit to your posts – it is an experience. Thank you, Lesley. 💖🎶

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    1. You are so kind, Michele. Thank you. 🙏🙇‍♀️

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      1. Sharing from my heart. 💖🙏🏻

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  6. Your whole post is beautiful Lesley .
    I agree with Suzanne 💕
    Your art should be in frames.🤗

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    1. ☺️ You are so kind, Maggie. Thank you 🙏🤗🖼️

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      1. My pleasure always Lesley 💕🤗🙏

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  7. Beautifully done. (K)

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    1. Many thanks, Kerfe 🤗💕

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  8. Lesley, these are brilliant~ and the artwork to go with each one is perfection!!

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    1. ☺️ Enormous thanks, Muri! 🤗💕xx

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  9. oh lesley, these are beautifful haynaku poems. My favorite would be the last one..

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    1. Thank you, Mich! The last one took the longest—and it’s all lies 😁🤗

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  10. Beautiful poems! Beautiful illustrations!

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    1. Oh, thank you so much, Robbie! 🙏🤗

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  11. The whole post is utterly beautiful Lesley, my favourite is the last poem and I love how it sounded with music 💞

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    1. Thank you, Ange, 🤗 The last one took a while to write! I found the subject Self Love difficult. ❤️ Glad you like the song 🎶

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  12. Lesley, I love how each piece moves from “yearning for a dream” to “I am Aphrodite.” The soft, painterly visuals make the whole series feel tender and complete. 💛

    ~David

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    1. Thank you so much, David. It was a nice challenge with the need of few words—so I scribbled a few pics 😁

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  13. Beautifully presented. Tea and bikkies and a Strauss waltz…very nice !

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    1. Thank you, Shaun ☺️🙏

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  14. Beautifully written Lesley

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    1. Thank you, my wonderfully inspiring friend 🙏

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  15. How gorgeous.
    The familial love. Waiting … yes. I know about that. And the sketches stupendous. They compliment and complement each other. Very artistic Ma’am 🙇🏻‍♀️

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  16. Wonderful! I also love the combination with a matching background of pastel like art.

    Great work.

    The “worrying waiting up late at night” resonates a lot with me at the moment, having still a bit younger children and a demanding job.

    Enjoyed this a lot!

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    1. I’m so pleased you enjoyed my post, Zip (is it okay to call you Zip?) Good luck with the waiting up! It’s a wonderful sound when you hear the latch on the door—and they’re home safe. 🤗

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      1. Yes, that was one of my nick names a while ago. Fine to call me Zip.

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  17. hi, Lesley❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Reena, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #180

    Much love,
    David

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    1. Thank you, David 🙏🤗

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  18. This is a lovely series, and the presentation is gorgeous.

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    1. Enormous thanks, Heather 🙏💕🤗

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