W3 Poetry Prompt #190 — Weave Written Weekly

This week’s Poet-of-the-Week is Sally, who challenges us to choose one phrase from Wordsworth’s Romantic sonnet The World Is Too Much With Us and weave it into our own poem. The poem doesn’t need to be a sonnet, but in a nod to the form, we’re asked to limit ourselves to fourteen lines or fewer.

Wordsworth’s The World Is Too Much With Us laments humanity’s growing alienation from nature in an age of materialism. He criticises society’s obsession with “getting and spending” and longs for a renewed spiritual connection to the natural world—even imagining pagan gods as preferable to modern disconnection.

Wordsworth wrote his poem in response to the Industrial Revolution, expressing his anxiety about humanity’s increasingly disruptive relationship with the natural world.

I chose the line “So might I, standing on this pleasant lea,” and wove it into my poem Small Rectangle World: Heads Down.

What follows is my own response to that tension between nature and our modern distractions.

How can we save the Earth from us?

Small Rectangle World: Heads Down | Digital ink©️Lesley Scoble

Small Rectangle World | Lyrics and Production©️Lesley Scoble ((voice and music AI‑generated)

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THANK YOU

Thank you, Sally, for the wonderful prompt.
My gratitude, as always, to David of The Skeptics Kaddish for all the encouragement and inspiration he offers.
And my thanks to you, dear reader, for taking the time to read and listen to my poem.

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39 responses to “Small Rectangle World: Urban Sonnet (and audio)”

  1. So wise, Lesley!

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    1. 😁 Wise—that’s me, Nolcha! 🦉
      Thank you. 🤗💕

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    1. Thank you so very much, Christine. 🤗💕 Your kind words mean a lot to me.

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  2. What a very interesting poem Lesley and also packed with wisdom 🫶

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    1. Wise—that’s me, Mich ! Thank you so much🙇‍♀️🤗

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  3. Such a noble plea! This was expertly written and equally as well performed.

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    1. Thanks so much, Violet 🤗 It took a few auditions to find the voice I wanted. I’ve tweaked the poem a little since the audio was recorded, but I liked the interpretation so I decided to run with it.

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  4. Beautifully written Lesley

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    1. Thanks so much, Sadje 😊

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  5. Lesley, an interesting and modern take on Wordsworth’s theme!

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    1. Ultra‑modern — that’s me, Muri! 😁
      If Wordsworth were to return to London today, I wonder what poem he’d write. If he thought the Industrial Revolution was bad, can you imagine what he’d say about today’s threats to the natural world!

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      1. It’s a good thing he can’t see it but I think he saw the eventual result!

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  6. Lesley, you are correct about if we would just look away from our devices, we would discover and truly take in real life, instead of shares and likes. Love it! 😊

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    1. Enormous thanks, O’Nika 🙏🤗

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  7. “Small rectangle world” — what a picture of today!

    Thank you for giving the context of Wordsworth’s sonnet, i.e the Industrial Revolution. The fact that his words are just as true today speaks to the greatness of that poem. I told David when I suggested the prompt that I had literally woken in the middle of the night with Wordsworth’s words running through my head because I get so stressed by the holidays. I think it’s this small rectangle world that amplifies that stress.

    Great poem, Leslie. Thank you for sharing it.

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    1. Thank you so much, Sally. 💕 And thank you for inspiring me — it was a brilliant prompt. I told David I might not have time this week to write a poem, but I ended up sitting up late to do it anyway! 😁

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  8. Yikes! Spot on, what have we done?

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    1. Thank you, Heather. I’m sorry to be so slow responding. May I wish you a Merry Christmas 🎄

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  9. I hope this isn’t factual, Lesley. A great poem.

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    1. Thanks, Robbie. ❤️
      There’s been a spate of phone thefts locally and sadly, we get to hear yells of ‘stop thief’ pretty often. The thieves then charge down alleyways and streets on their bikes in coordinated manoeuvres. Phones snatched in a flash!

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      1. I read about this in London. For the first time ever, we were warned to watch our bags and cellphones when we arrived at Heathrow. Anyhow, have a Merry Christmas.

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  10. I love this line “While we stare at shares and likes all day”. 👏 It’s simple but the rhythm is very effective.

    Thankfully I live in a place where we can leave our things on our bikes, leave houses unlocked and leave cars with their engines running, without fear of anything being stolen. (There are other things to worry about, though!)

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    1. Thank you, Shaun. I’d love to be able to leave the doors unlocked! The other things to worry about are spiders and Australians, I presume 🤭

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      1. I’m in Thailand these days so Australians aren’t so much of a problem unless I come across one in the wild! 🤣

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  11. Lesley — this really clicked for me. That moment after the phone’s gone, when you’re suddenly looking up, feels so true, and “our small rectangle world” landed immediately.

    ~David

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    1. Thank you so much, David. ❤️xx

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  12. .How can we let this be—this muss?
    How can we save the Earth from us?’

    Pertinent question, indeed.

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    1. Thank you, Indira 💕🙏

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  13. hi, Lesley❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Nolcha, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/12/24/w3-prompt-191-weave-written-weekly/

    Much love,
    David

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    1. Thanks, David. My response is live too 🤗

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