While I was reading the prompt devised by Poet-of-the-Week Nolcha Fox for this week’s W3 Poetry Prompt #194, I was also expecting a Post Office collection for a large parcel. Just then, an email arrived saying they were unable to collect it.

The Post Office offers this wonderful service where they pick up your parcels, provide the labels, and save you the trek to the Post Office with bulky packages and long queues. It’s brilliant when it works.

This is my first attempt at writing a Cherita. The Cherita is a modern poetry form created by Ai Li in 1997, and its name comes from the Malay word for story or tale.

Telling a whole story in just six lines is quite a challenge—but here we go.

Cherita poem No.1

Lesley Scoble, January 2026


My thanks to Nolcha for introducing me to the Cherita poetry form.
My thanks, as always, to David, The Skeptics Kaddish, for his constant poetic motivation and encouragement.
And my whole hearted thanks to you, the reader, for spending time with my poem.


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18 responses to “Special Delivery Collection: Cherita poem No. 1”

  1. Lesley, this is a good one! A complete story and I can relate as well!!

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    1. Thanks, Muri 🤗 The parcel is still in our doorway! We booked a second collection and got the same email again. Shall again tomorrow- third time lucky?

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      1. I hope 3rd time is a charm…

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  2. How frustrating, Lesley – and so relatable!

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    1. 😁Thanks, Nolcha. We still have the parcel in the hallway. 🙃

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      1. Oh, good grief!

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  3. Haha! Good one, Lesley! 😀❤️

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    1. 😀❤️ Thanks, Punam! xx

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  4. This is my postman in reverse- they will send me an electronic message saying my package was undeliverable as there was no one at home to sign or it- when I am home waiting for them – but they never bothered to come to my door!

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    1. It’s infuriating and dishonest. On a hot day I had the front door ajar and I saw a hand drop a piece of paper through the gap—the note read “As you were out you will have to collect the parcel from Mount Pleasant (main Post Office Centre)”
      Can you believe it!!!!

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  5. Lesley — this hits close to home for me. The polite screen message clashing with that box in the hallway is wry and unsettling!

    ~David

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    1. They say they are collecting it tomorrow 😆
      Thank you, David 🤗

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  6. hi, Lesley❣️

    Sorry for the delayed message (my life has been very hectic of late), but this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Marion, is live until tomorrow. Here’s the URL:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/01/21/w3-prompt-195-weave-written-weekly/

    Much love,
    David

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