I wrote The Secret Wheelchair in my newly invented Corridor syllabic poetry form.

Required pattern:
1 / 6 / 6 / 1 / 3 / 6 / 6
plus one flexible 9-syllable line per stanza

I hope it’s okay to submit my made-up form for this week’s Tanka Tuesday Syllabic Poetry Challenge No. 49.
Thank you for highlighting that January is Mental Health Month.

A poem to help raise mental health awareness

The Secret Wheelchair | Digital ink and watercolour©️Lesley Scoble

THANK YOU
My thanks to this week’s Tanka Tuesday host, Yvette Calleiro, for her Mental Health syllabic poetry prompt.


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31 responses to “The Secret Wheelchair: Corridor Syllabic Poetry Form”

  1. This is a very insightful poem about mental illness. It is sad that it is often less visible than physical disabilities.

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    1. Thank you, Dan. Hidden mental health struggles deserve so much more of our awareness. 🙏

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  2. The hidden illness. So true and so well told here.

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    1. 🙏 Thank you so much, Violet. 🙏

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  3. Very true my friend. Since we can’t see a mental health issue, we don’t know how to help them.

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    1. Invisible disabilities can be so misunderstood. Thank you, kind Sadje 🙏🌸

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      1. Very true my friend. And nobody wears a label.

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      2. 🙏🏼🌹🙏🏼

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  4. Poignant metaphor, Lesley and definitely a compelling reason to pause and consider. 🙏🏻🌻

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    1. Thank you so much, Michele. 🤗💗🌸

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      1. Thank you so much. 🤗 Love your work! 💗👏🏻

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      2. ☺️ I’m truly humbled and flattered and chuffed. 🤗🤗🤗

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      3. Truly talented, too! 🙌🏻✨🤗

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      4. Stop! I’m blushing. 😁🤗☺️xxx

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      5. 😄 Well, red looks great on you! 😍 xxx

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      6. ☺️🌹Don’t stop 😆🤗

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      7. 😂 I have a feeling we won’t be able to sit together in a class or anywhere where quietly listening is the expectation. 🤣

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  5. Powerful poem, Lesley! Thanks for participating this week!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you so much, Yvette. 🙏🤗💗

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  6. Lesley, more awareness of the unseen illnesses is always needed!

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    1. It is indeed, Muri! 🌹 Thank you for reading 🙏🤗💗

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  7. This is such a good poem to shine the spotlight on mental health. I can’t believe that you draw too!! You are so talented, Lesley. 🌹

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    1. ☺️❤️ Thank you, Colleen. 🙏🤗🌹xxx

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