I wrote my shadorma diptych, Glass, in response to the W3 Poetry Prompt #202, where the poet of the week, Nancy Richy, invites us to write a shadorma as a close‑up study of a single inanimate object or a very specific moment. You can read her full prompt guidelines below.

I hope you enjoy my shadorma. Cheers!

Looking down into the bottom of a brandy glass, we see the amber swirl of the drink.
Glass | Photo©️Lesley Scoble

—Lesley Scoble, March 2026

The image shows blurred and distorted city buildings through the bottom of an empty drinking glass
I look through the bottom of an emptied glass | Photo©️Lesley Scoble

Narrated by me.

Glass, written and narrated by Lesley Scoble

THANK YOU
Thank you, Nancy, for your wonderful prompt.
Thank you, David, without whom many a poem would not be written.
And my thanks to you, dear reader, for spending time with my poem.


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25 responses to “Glass: Shadorma Diptych poem (And Audio Narration)”

  1. You certainly captured the moment!! Love that last line – need an aspirin!

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    1. Haha, thanks so much, Muri 🤗

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  2. You perfectly captured it Lesley🌹❤️

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    1. How kind you are, Mich. Thank you 🤗

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  3. So nicely told! I love your descriptive voice!

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    1. Oh that’s so lovely of you to say so. Thank you, sweet Violet 🙏😊

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    1. Thank you so much, Josie 🤗

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  4. Love this Lesley- especially your reading of it …. I’ve been there a few times 😅

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    1. Thank you so much, AJ. I truly appreciate your compliment. 😆 So glad I’m not alone. Cheers!

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      1. Cheers well it is a Friday night after all 🥃

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  5. They say you never find the answer in the bottom of a glass …. maybe contemplate tea leaves!! 😉- Seriously – I Love it 💞

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    1. 😁 I read tea leaves as readily as I peer into the bottom of a glass. 😆 So glad you enjoyed it, Suzanne! 🤗❤️

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      1. 😊 which gives a better reading ..? 😉 💞

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  6. Very sensory. I could put myself in this poem. Well done!

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    1. Thank you so much, Heather 🤗💓 Cheers!

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  7. A classic poem by you, Lesley; Your last line had me grinning. Love it! Thanks for participating. 🥰

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    1. Thank you so much, Nancy. A classic eh? Wahoo! Loved your prompt—great challenge 💗

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  8. Lesley,

    I like the change to the empty glass. “through this lens I see a whirl” shows that dizzy feeling to me!

    ~David

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    1. Thank you, David. Cheers! 🥂😁

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  9. hi, Lesley❣️

    Our new W3, hosted by our beloved Dennis, is now live until next Monday (March 23):

    W3 Prompt #203: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Much love,
    David

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