I wrote my poem The Wrecker for this week’s W3 Poetry Prompt #203, hosted by poet of the week Dennis Johnstone. His prompt invites us to be the lighthouse in a poem of 20–25 lines. Full guidelines are linked below.

The Wrecker | Digital ink©️Lesley Scoble

What, no audio‽ — An audio version of The Wrecker is on its way; it just needs a little more time.

THANK YOU
Warm thanks to Dennis for his wonderful prompt, which inspired me to write this second poem on the Be a Lighthouse theme.
Warm thanks also to David for hosting W3 We’ave Weekly Poetry Prompts.
And thank you, dear reader, for spending time with my poem.


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29 responses to “The Wrecker: Free Verse Poem”

  1. This one turns ominous!! Well done.

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    1. Thank you, Muri 🙇‍♀️💓

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  2. Ah… I loved this dark energy. Sinister poetry, Lesley. That 4th stanza nailed it for me.
    Well done.

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    1. Thanks so much, my kind friend. 🙏

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      1. You’re welcome, Lesley.

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  3. Lesley, you’ve crafted a dark and energetic response to the prompt. I’m off to the lifeboat station – it’s going to be all hands to the oars this night.

    I admired the sense of action driving the poem forward. There’s just enough detail to set the backdrop, but the real centre is what’s happening: everything moves with purpose.

    “storm-born screams

    race and whine

    like nightmares”

    Here, you’ve taken what could be an overly familiar word – nightmares – and salvaged it through the build-up of screams, racing, and whining. It becomes visceral and active, fully justifying its use. It’s often tempting to avoid such words altogether; your choice define it with precision pays off.

    The decision to take the false lighthouse / wrecker angle works well and is sustained throughout. The light as lure rather than warning is clear, and the consequences are felt in the movement toward the rocks.

    The short, broken lines suit the storm setting and carry that momentum. It reads with real urgency.

    Thanks for such a vivid and committed response to the prompt.

    Dennis

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    1. Dennis, thank you so much for such an inspiring prompt. I love everything to do with the sea—the drama of crashing waves, etc. I am humbled that you chose this poem—and proud to be the next POW. Enormous thanks for your thoughtful analysis of the poem; I truly appreciate the care and time it takes.

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  4. So well done, Lesley! Dark and ominous!

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    1. Thanks so much, Punam. 🙇‍♀️💓

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  5. I have read about the wreckers luring ships to harm so they can scavenge the shipwreck spoils. Such an incredibly shocking thing to do, maybe desperate, certainly ruthless and heartless. I know it was a different time, but today we still have pirates and people smugglers. Can it really be that any one of us under the same circumstances could stoop so low? I hope I never conclusively get to answer the undertow of your poe,.

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    1. Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Sean. I really appreciate it.

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  6. Lesley, “jagged greedy teeth” gives the sea a kind of appetite that unsettles me; it makes the whole scene feel intentional, not just violent.

    By the way, Dennis selected you as our new PoW, and I sent you an email earlier today. If you haven’t received it, please be in touch!

    ~David

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    1. Thank you so much, as always, David. ❤️🌹

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  7. This has such a sinister feel to it, but it compels, like the horror movie you really didn’t want to watch but you can’t turn off – bravo 👏

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    1. Oh, thank you so much, Suzanne—that’s such a wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it. 🙇‍♀️

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  8. Beautiful! And haunting! I love it!

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    1. Danke dir vielmals, mein Freund. I truly appreciate your compliment. 🙏

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  9. This is so good! The mix of short and longer lines builds the intensity of the impending doom.

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    1. Thank you so much, Heather! I’m chuffed you like it. ☺️

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      1. You ate very welcome!

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      2. You’re welcome.

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  10. A great poem, Lesley. You have a great poetry style.

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  11. most deserving of praise. Just awesome. Thanks

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    1. Thank you, Selma. I’m pleased you like it. 🤗💓

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  12. […] Skeptic’s Kaddish, W3 Prompt # 204 is given to us by the multi-talented Lesley Scoble. Lesley asks us to write a Cameo poem—a tiny, distilled moment—on any theme you choose.Form7 […]

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  13. as i read your poem over at W3 my mind wondered to the windy stormy seas of long ago and maybe even today where no light shines but the ever present standing lighthouse and the perils of ships hoping for guidance… thank you also for this week’s W3 intro to the Cameo….

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