Yvette M. Calleiro is the Poet of the Week for the W3 Poetry Prompt (#209).
This week, she invites us to write a poem of twenty lines or fewer that explores a fictional world—utopian or dystopian.
For the full details of the prompt, click below.

Yvette’s prompt: Elsewhere

With so much chaos in the world, let’s step away from reality and imagine something entirely new. Create a poem that explores a fictional world—utopian or dystopian, your choice. This world must be wholly imagined and not reflect the current reality we live in. Let your imagination run freely.

Requirements

  • Use 20 lines or fewer.
  • Write about a fictional utopian or dystopian world.
  • Do not portray the current state of our world in your poem.

I went with the dystopian and hope you enjoy it.

Nowhere | Digital ink©️Lesley Scoble

Narrated by me

Nowhere, written and narrated by Lesley Scoble

ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS

My enormous thanks to Yvette for the mighty utopian/dystopian prompt she set us this week.

My gratitude, as always, to the redoubtable genius of David Bogomolny and his weekly W3 Poetry Prompts.

And my thanks — with apologies — to Maurits Cornelis Escher (1898–1972) for his influence on my illustration. His prints of illogical stairways leading nowhere first impressed me many years ago.

And last but not least, my thanks to you, the reader, for being here.

Museum Escher in Het Paleis


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32 responses to “Nowhere: Dystopian Poem & Narration”

  1. This gave me the chills, Lesley.

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    1. Punam, that’s brilliant! 😁 Thank you. I’m delighted you got the chills.

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  2. This is brilliant, Lesley. Loved your reading.

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    1. Oh thank you, kind Robbie. 🙏🤗

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  3. Wonderful! This kind of puts me in mind of the circles the inmates walked in Midnight Express. I loved hearing your interpretive voice!

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    1. Thank you enormously, Violet! I loved that film! And I narrated it especially for you. 🙏💓

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  4. Excellent! I read it your story first, which was fabulous. Then I read it again while listening to your recording and I was blown away! Your voice is perfect and added just the right touch of Gothic eerie-ness. Brilliant work, Lesley! ✨

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    1. Aw, thank you so much, Nancy. You’ve made my day with your comment. 🙇‍♀️💗xx

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  5. Excellent poem Lesley

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    1. Thank you, Sadje 🙏

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      1. You’re welcome my friend

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  6. A very dystopian poem! And the Escher is a perfect inspiration!

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  7. Great work Lesley – love your reading 🙌

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    1. Thanks so much, AJ 🤗

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  8. M. C. Escher would be so proud. Great poem (and drawing).

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    1. Thanks so much, Sally. Delighted you also like the drawing 🙏

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  9. Very unsettling. Well done!

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    1. Thank you kindly, Heather 🤗

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  10. Eerily going nowhere…making my mind go everywhere …! great writing Lesley 💞

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    1. Hehe, thank you, Suzanne! 😊💓

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  11. Fantastic poem, Lesley! I love your never-ending dystopia! Thank you for participating this week!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. ‘Twas my pleasure, Yvette. Thank you — and thank you for the great prompt 🙏

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  12. Lesley, I feel a quiet chill in “I smile back then look down at the floor,” because it makes the fear feel small and human at the same time.

    ~David

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    1. Thank you, David. I’m delighted that line affected you. 🙏🧡

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  13. Excellent take, Lesely. Brilliant.

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  14. hi, Lesley❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Dawn, is live until Monday:

    W3 Prompt #210: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Much love,
    David

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  15. Got a shiver reading and then listening to your voice……spooky! x

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