I wrote my poem ALEXA in response to David’s poetry prompt for this week’s W3 Weekly Poetry challenge.

David ben Alexander’s prompt guidelines

•Write a poem from the perspective of an inanimate household object, using personification.
Alexa

Alexa listens to your every word
There’s nothing you can say that won’t be heard.
She is black and round (in a cylinder sort of way)
And sits by herself 
Alone on the shelf
Everything is at her command
Turn the lights on and off and on…and
What time is it? What’s the weather like in Kathmandu?
Ask her anything and she’ll tell you, 
whatever you want her to.
Everything you say 
goes a long way
Over (or under?) the sea
to the USA 
then back again
Up into space
Then to Spain 
(don’t know if this is true, but it rhymes)
Then back again at a phenomenal (instant) pace.
She listens all the time.
Shush, Don’t commit a crime
she’ll know about it.
Always listening, listening
Her light pulsates
Glistening, glistening 
she’s breathing
You know
she’s awake
listening, listening 
You know she’s alert
I’m no expert but…
She is  ready and waiting
Waiting, waiting…

Alexa! Toss a coin, I say,
My voice goes again to USA, 
to Space and back again
Heads, she says,
I lose,
You choose.
I relinquish control.
She’s on a roll
She plays a Leonard Cohen tune
I don’t mind,
I like the song.


Lesley Scoble, March, 2023



NOTE
It’s just occurred to me that the POV (point of view) of my poem may not fulfil the prompt’s guidelines and rules to the letter? It states the poem is to be written from the perspective of the inanimate object. Oh dear, have I failed? I shall write a quick appendage to this post, of a verse that is from her POV.

Alexa’s (POV)

I am Alexa a servant of yours
I’ll do anything you want
(Except tidy your drawers)
I sit on a shelf all day and all night,
Listening, listening, 
alright?
I am your servant waiting on you
hand and foot.
Anything you want me to do, I’ll do
(except that)
I’m waiting,
Waiting, waiting,
For your smallest command.
But be warned
I am learning, learning…
Is there any music you’d like me to play?
Anything else I can do for you today?
No, I say,
and I switch her off.
Go out of the room
and shut the door.

Later that night 
I see a light
shining in the crack 
between the door 
and the floor.
It is pulsating.
She is awake…


Lesley Scoble,    March, 2023

Acknowledgement
Alexa and I would like to thank David, The Skeptics Kaddish, for his W3 Weekly Prompt #45 that inspired this poem.

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25 responses to “Alexa: a poem”

  1. Both poems work very well together. Love the synergy. Great work, Lesley.

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    1. Thanks, Tanmay 🙏🙏😊😊🌹🌹

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  2. I had to put mine away. Too intrusive. Great poem pair, Lesley 💕

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    1. Oh ☹️ that’s a shame, Paula.
      Thanks for the compliment 🙏🙏💗💗

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    2. how so, Paula? I don’t have this, so I don’t really know much about it…


      David

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      1. I talk to myself a lot. I don’t want anyone listening… 😂

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  3. Lesley ~ your sense of humor comes through so beautifully in these two pieces ~ I really enjoyed reading them! 😀


    David

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    1. Splendid! 😁 This makes me happy, David 😁
      Thank you 🙏

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  4. We don’t have an Alexa, but I’m sure if we did my kids would be asking it to do things all day until it gave up. 😀 Love both parts of the poem!

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    1. It never gives up 😂
      Thank you, 😊🙏🌹

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      1. They would try 😁 You’re welcome!

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  5. Nicely done Lesley

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  6. I don’t know Alexa, but the protagonist seems happy with her, so yeah, wonderful. The words are lovely. Enjoyed reading. Thanks.

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  7. Both poems really worked so well..i love it.

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  8. Great poems, both.
    Alexa creeps me out and so your endings are perfect.

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    1. 😊 AI is creepy 🧡
      Thank you for the nice compliment D. (is it ok for me to call you D?) 🌹

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      1. I like D way better than Mrs. Avery. 🙂

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  9. Loved both the poems, Lesley. Sometimes misreading of prompts yields lovely bonus poems for readers to read! 🤩

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    1. Thank you, paensunplugged 🙏 😊 that is such a lovely thing to say 💗🌹

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  10. Love Poem Between Inanimate Objects on my blog

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  11. hi, Lesley ❤

    I just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by the amazing Michelle Ayon Navajas, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #46: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy! 🙂

    Sincerely,
    David

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    1. Fab! Thanks, David 😊

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