
This weekโs # Whatdoyousee image is of a woman in a precarious predicament on a steep slope. The prompt is to write an original story, poem or a caption, inspired by this image.
My response to Sadjeโs #WDYS prompt is to write a waltz wave poem. I think this poetic format lends itself to slippingโฆ falling down a cliff.
Cliff Hanger

Cliff Hanger Save me! save me from the slippery slope! Iโm slide- -ing down this peril- -ous cliff! If you help me I can live ~ If you donโt there is no hope ~ and Iโll drop and Die and Then youโll cry, Oh, oh no! I let her go! so Take my hand and lift me from the prec- -ipitous edge of deathโs abyss ~ haul me to a ledge please or Iโll faโฆ Lesley Scoble, April, 2023
Thanks My thanks to Sadje, #WDYS for her inspiring photo prompt. Credits Photo Prompt image credit: Unsplash Cliff Hanger | Digital paintingยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble
18 responses to “Cliff Hanger: a waltz wave poem”
Wow, that word drop..i love it..and the digital painting too๐น
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Thank you so much, Mich โบ๏ธ๐๐ธ
your comment means a lot ๐
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So well done with both the digital painting and the waltz poem. Thanks Lesley for joining in.
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โtwas a great pleasure for me ๐น
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Thanks ๐๐ผ
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The end left me hanging… Nice poem, and fantastic art.
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haha ๐
Thanks, Tanmay ๐๐น
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Sheesh, I didn’t read the title! My bad. You’re welcome, Lesley.
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Keep hanginโ ๐๐ฉต
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I love the poem and the illustration. Youโre a talented lady!
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Thank you, Clive! ๐๐ for your lovely comment๐น
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My heart dropped (quite literally!) ๐
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๐ haha ๐
Thanks Aboli ๐
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Very cool, Lesley, and I’m really enjoying your artwork! ๐
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Thanks so much Nancy ๐ Iโm so pleased you doโEnjoyment is just what itโs for ๐ฅณ
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Indeed it isโฃ๏ธ
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Ooh! Nice way to leave your readers hanging! Love it, Lesley and your artwork is awesome. โค๏ธ
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Thank you so much, Punam!
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