Walter’s not coming | Sketch©️Lesley Scoble

I wrote my poem, ‘Where’s Walter,’ in response to Punam’s (Peansunplugged) challenge to write a 44-word quadrille poem including the word ‘alter’.

My thanks to d’Verse Poets, Quadrille #222: There’s no alternative.
Enormous thanks to our most gracious host, Punam, for her unalterable inspiration!

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29 responses to “Where’s Walter? a quadrille poem”

  1. Lesley, this poem feels both poignant and thought-provoking. I feel a tension between humor and gravity in the lines, especially with the question of Walter’s absence 🙂

    ~David

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    1. Oh thank you, David. 🙏Your words make me so happy 🤗

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  2. Lesley, this reminded me of the movie The Runaway Bride! Love the touch of humour to a serious situation. 😊

    Thanks for your kind words. 💗🙇🏼‍♀️

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    1. Thank you so much for your inspiration and your lovely comment, Punam 🤗💖🌷

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      1. My pleasure, dear Lesley. 🤗💗😍

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  3. Oh, Hilarious, Lesley 😂🤣

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    1. Tee hee. Thanks, Robbie! 😁🩷

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    1. Thank you, Maggie ☺️ xx

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      1. My pleasure Lesley 🤗xx

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  4. Sounds like poor Miss Havisham to me…. I wonder if she will keep the cake.

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    1. I expect so, Björn. 🍰🙃

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  5. Sad but funny. Or do I mean, funny but sad? xx

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    1. Thank you, Restlessjo! 🎭😊 xx

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  6. Poor Walter. I wish he could have been honest and just bowed out gracefully..

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    1. I love your compassion for Walter, Violet.
      Poor chap was actually locked in the bathroom. He turned up half an hour later. 🩷

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  7. A cruel trick, to be left at the altar.

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    1. It is harsh, but all turned out well in the end—she married the best man. 😁

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  8. Wow! I love the illustration. The poem is also quite brilliant!!

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  9. ☺️ Thank you so much, Muri ☺️🙇‍♀️

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  10. It was crisp and clean, that was my interpretation of your poem….. I read it twice out loud!

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    1. Goodness, Maggie! I’d love to hear your rendition! We could do a podcast! Thank you so much dear friend. 😘

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