I wrote my poem, Mirror, Mirror, (and Merlot), in response to the W3 Prompt #156, where the Poet of the Week challenges us to compose an acrostic poem using the word TRANSFORMATION.

Carol Anne’s prompt guidelines
This week, write an acrostic poem using the word transformation. In an acrostic, the first letter of each line spells out a word or phrase—vertically down the left margin. 

Each line should relate to the theme of transformation in some way: personal, spiritual, political, emotional, seasonal—whatever resonates with you. There’s no set meter or rhyme scheme, but thoughtful structure is always welcome.


This AI-generated song was born from my words, and the voice and music gently orchestrated by my musical prompts.

Mirror, Mirror, and Merlot©️Lesley Scoble
Mirror, Mirror, and Merlot | Illustration©️Lesley Scoble


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39 responses to “Mirror, Mirror (and Merlot) an acrostic poem”

  1. Just as I got up to go to the hairdresser, you change tracks drop the wisdom bomb! Lesley, I love this to bits. Only you could have written such quirky, wise and honest verse.❤️💕🥰

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    1. Don’t mind the missing articles and punctuation, I was hungry. 😉

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    2. Haha! Thanks so much for this bombshell of a comment, Punam! So kind you are 🙏🩷 🙇‍♀️

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  2. Funny how it takes getting older to figure that out…great poem!

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    1. Many thanks, Heather! 🙏☺️

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  3. A great poem, Lesley, although I am sure you look great with red tinted hair 💛🌞

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    1. Haha! Thank you, Robbie 🧑🏻‍🦰xxx

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  4. I enjoyed the poem and I like the image you made to accompany it. Clever.

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    1. Thanks so much, Tripsy ♥️

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  5. I love the whimsy of the beauty shop transformation. It was always a bit of a shock when I turned to the mirror and discovered that the shoulder length trim had become a short bob!

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    1. Thank you, Muri. I think we’ve all been traumatised by the hairdresser at some point. I don’t go to hairdressers since I fell asleep and woke up to my hair hacked to within an inch of its life (wish I’d sued).

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      1. I had that happen once too!! I had really long hair, and wanted it “styled” came out with a crop!! Never again..! Did we go to the same place 😂💞

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      2. Methinks, perhaps! 🤣 I collected my boys from school and shall never forget their look of horror. 💗 The salon offered me free hair products. I bawled at them, “what good would that be—I haven’t any hair!” I cried for days.

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      3. Me too…. I really understand your pain.. I had mine highlighted once by a hairdresser and it all fizzed, she offered to cut it!! I refused and went elsewhere but I hated my hair for months … i just keep my hair quite long now and put it up 😂

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      4. Suzanne! Me too! And the money we save by not going to the hairdressers!

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      5. I was given a haircut and a perm that made me look like a poodle. I went home and cried. My mother tried to straighten it but it only made my hair look like straw! I was supposed to attend a wedding with my parents but my mother said I could stay home! It was that bad!

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      6. We should bring back the medieval stocks for bad hairdressers! The trauma they inflict can last a lifetime. Did you miss the wedding? Cloche hats and beanies 😂 are good at covering bad hairdos. Sounds like you should have sued too!

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      7. I opted to stay home instead of going looking like I did. It was midsummer and hotter than blue blazes so a hat would have been unbearable! I was a HS student and this was the first time I’d gone to the beauty shop on my own… As it was, I never went back to that shop.

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      8. I fully understand. I avoided many a social event until my hair grew again. Every time I pass the shop that hacked my hair, I growl and curse. 😂 Do you realise how emotionally damaged we are?

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  6. What a great take Lesley…. 💞

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    1. Thank you, Suzanne 🤗 xx

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  7. Oh, thank you, Selma 🙇‍♀️🩷🤗

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  8. Lesley, I love the humor and vulnerability in this, especially the wine-soaked honesty that crashes the party midway!

    ~David

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    1. 😁 Thanks so much, David. Cheers! 🍷

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  9. Lol! A fun take Lesley.

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  10. Just honest, Lesley. I am always amazed by your range in writing. Truly enjoy everything you write. You are most welcome. 🤗💗

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    1. I’m truly honoured and flattered by your compliment. Thank you, Punam. 🙇‍♀️ ☺️ 🤗

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      1. 🥰🙇🏼‍♀️😍🤗

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      2. 🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

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      3. 😍🙇🏼‍♀️🥰🙇🏼‍♀️

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  11. I loved this—especially as I’m married to a former red-head. She’s embraced the grey now. I read the poem as a witty and self-aware reflection on the illusion of transformation through superficial change. It begins with hopeful anticipation—new hair, new look, imagined admiration—only to unravel into disillusionment, regret, and wry commentary on aging and self-image. I liked the humour and sarcasm that masks vulnerability, poking fun at society’s beauty standards while confessing a longing to believe in them. The finishing flourish suggests real transformation lies not in appearance but in perception and self-acceptance. Nicely done, as always.

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    1. Thank you, Stonehead, for such a complimentary, thoughtful and generous review—it really means a lot! I especially appreciate hearing about your wife’s journey from red to grey.
      Your interpretation captures exactly what I hoped to convey. Your words about transformation and self-acceptance reflect the core of my poem. Honestly, you tell it better than I! Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts—I really appreciate it. 🙏

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