I wrote my poem, Breathless, in response to Sadje’s #Whatdoyousee #290 Photo Prompt Challenge. This challenge invites participants to write something inspired by the image below—a time-lapse image of a man climbing a rock face by Dennis Yu Unsplash

I hope you enjoy my ‘minimalist’ interpretation of the prompt.

Breathless

Breathless | Digital ink©️Lesley Scoble

Lesley Scoble, May 2025


Breathless

a minimalist poem in two parts

  1. The Ascent
The Ascent, Part 1. of the minimalist poem, Breathless | Written and narrated by Lesley Scoble

2. The View

The View, Part 2. of the minimalist poem, Breathless | Written and narrated by Lesley Scoble

Thank you, Sadje, for your #WDYS inspirational prompts.

Thank you, dear reader, for your time reading my poem. 🙏

I’ll leave you on a breathless note with Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds (with some help from a few rabbits:)


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21 responses to “Breathless: a free verse poem”

  1. So beautiful Lesley…and your reading is a treat…🫶🫶🫶

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    1. Awwwh, Thank you, Mich. ☺️🩷

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  2. It’s so beautifully told Lesley. Thanks for the second entry. 🫶🏼

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    1. Thank you so much for inspiring me, Sadje! 🙏🩷

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  3. Beautiful writing, Lesley!

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    1. Thank you so much, Nolcha! 😊💖xx

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  4. You are seriously spoiling me, Leslie- I feel as if I have stumbled upon the ghost of my beloved Margaret, and I am privy to her latest work! I absolutely love your take on this, so dramatic in its exicution.

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    1. Thank you for your special words, Violet! I’m super chuffed!
      Please may I ask who your Margaret is? 🙏💕

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      1. Margaret Rutherford of course! I love her so much, and every time I hear you read to me it is like I am being allowed in her company!

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      2. Haha! 😂 You flatter me. You are welcome anytime, Violet. 🙇‍♀️’tis my pleasure to have you visit. Kind regards, Margaret. 😊

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  5. Love the way you’ve read this breathtaking poem, Lesley.

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    1. Balroop, thank you so much ☺️ for your wonderful compliment. 💕🙏

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  6. Thank you, thank you, thank you, milady! 🙇🏼‍♀️🙇🏼‍♀️🙇🏼‍♀️
    You see, Lesley, I am not the only one who so enjoys your readings.
    Please do keep adding recordings every time you post a poem. And of course, also your drawings. 😍

    By the way, your poem left me breathless. 💕🥰💕🥰

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  7. Lesley I love the 2 part poem format! It works so well with this poem!!

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    1. Thank you, Muri! I wrote the 2nd part first as the complete poem—then I wrote the 1st part. They both felt like separate poems that belong together. (Does that make sense?) xx

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      1. Perfect sense and they fit together as if made as one!!!

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  8. What’s not to enjoy! I love your creativity and artistic expression. Thank you, Lesley. ✨👏🏻

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    1. Thank you so much, Michele! 🙏🤗💖

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      1. A treat! Thank you! 🤗💖😊

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