This image is from Alexander Mass on Pexels.

I love this haiku by Matsuō Bashō

ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
My thanks to Melissa Lemay for her inspiring Melissa’s Fandango Flash Fiction Challenge #369.
The image of the butterflies in the vitrine is by Alexander Mass on Pexels.
And my thanks to you, the reader, for spending this time with me.


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11 responses to “On Display”

  1. Loved the last verse…
    And there are men who love that way when it comes to relationships.
    Well done, Lesley. 😊

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    1. Aw, thank you my kind friend. 🤗

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      1. You’re welcome, Lesley.

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  2. Excellent Lesley you capture the tension between the beauty of the ‘specimen’ and the violence of preservation ♥️

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  3. The poem criticizes how beauty and life are captured and transformed into objects devoid of freedom.

    It conveys a sense of sadness at the reality of a life reduced to mere exhibition.

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  4. Great poem, Lesley! Love the haiku you shared!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  5. Your poem almost looks like a caterpillar or butterfly.🐛

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  6. A beautiful and thought-provoking poem. The imagery of the butterflies is both delicate and powerful, reminding us how precious freedom and life truly are. I especially loved the ending and the Bashō quote it adds hope and a sense of journey beyond being “on display.” Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

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    1. I feel truly honoured by your comment. Thank you 🙏

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      1. Thank you so much. 🙏 I truly enjoyed reading your article, poem, and post. Your words are always thoughtful, inspiring, and a pleasure to read. 😊

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      2. I’m a new blogger, so it is truly an honor for me to connect with your blog. Thank you for sharing such inspiring and meaningful content. I always enjoy reading your posts and learning from your writing. 🙏😊

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