My poem The Waterfall Fell was written in response to Sadje’s #Whatdoyousee #295 prompt, inspired by Karsten Winegeart’s striking image of a waterfall. I hope you enjoy it—there’s a song version at the foot of the poem that I’m especially excited to share!


Audio—The Waterfall Fell is now a song! Please enjoy!

The Waterfall Fell_Lyrics by Lesley Scoble_Music & Voice by Suno.com

The song is also published on Suno. com and you can listen to it here

THANKS
Thank you, Sadje, for your wonderfully inspiring and motivational #WDYS prompts.
And thank you to you, the reader, for reading—and/or listening to—my poem. 🙏

Follow the link below to learn more about Sadje’s #What do you see prompts.


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18 responses to “The Waterfall Fell: a free verse poem (& song!)”

  1. Wildly impressive, Lesley!

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    1. Thank you, Mitch! ☺️🙏

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  2. All through my reading I was anticipating the reading, the song did not disappoint.

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    1. Thank you, Violet! I’m delighted it didn’t disappoint as I was thrilled with the way the song came out. It’s exactly how I wanted it to be. 🙏🎵💕

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  3. Oh I love this song and how beautifully it sung. A truly remarkable achievement. Love the poem Lesley. Thanks for joining in.

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    1. Thank you so much, Sadje 🙏 My apologies for my unforgivably late response to your wonderful comment. So sorry. I’m so grateful for your wonderful prompt that inspired this! My humble thanks 🙇‍♀️💗

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      1. It’s okay dear friend. Sometimes the comments get lost in spam folder.

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  4. This is beautiful, Lesley!

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    1. Thank you, Dawn! ☺️💕🤗

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  5. Your poem not only describes a waterfall, but becomes it: a visual, sonorous and emotional journey that ends in a cry of admiration.

    Thank you for sharing it! 🌊💙

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    1. It is my pleasure, Lincol. Enormous thanks for your beautiful comment🙏😊 Muchisímas graciás 💖

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    1. 😁 haha! Thank you, Muri! I love your pun! 😁xxx

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      1. Hehe! I’m not usually very punny but had a moment! Glad I could bring a smile!

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  6. That’s crazy with the music. I like it.

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    1. Thank you Nicole. 😊🎶🙏

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  7. Your poem looks like a waterfall!

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    1. Thanks, Trip! Please forgive my tardy response. Don’t know how I missed your comment.🙄

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