Inspired by Sadje’s #WhatDoYouSee 302 photo prompt, I wrote my poem Jumping in a Puddle—a celebration of childhood wonder and the joyous rebellion of getting wet simply because you can.

#WDYS photo prompt image Credit; Nathan Dumlao @ Unsplash

I also sketched my own interpretation of the prompt photo (image credit; Nathan Dumlao) and created a song to go with it: a waltz made for dancing in puddles, which you can hear at the end of the poem.

Jumping in a Puddle | Digital ink & watercolour©️Lesley Scoble

Enjoy the song of the poem—and waltz in a puddle!

Jumping in a Puddle©️Lesley Scoble, August 2025
Not the first time I’ve danced in a puddle | Photo by my son, Daniel

THANK YOU
Thank you, Sadje, for providing me with your inspirational prompts.
And thank you, the reader, for your time reading and listening to my poem.

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29 responses to “Jumping in a Puddle: a narrative poem in free verse (& song!)”

  1. Move over Miss Rachael! Miss Lesley has come to town! Adorable!

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    1. Haha! Thank you soooo much, Violet! What a joy your comment is. 🙏❤️

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  2. Awwww how lovely, I feel a musical production on the stage … 💞 a sort of Willy Wonka style, a fun, happy, feel good style 🤩

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  3. Haha! I am not opposed to puddle jumping! This poem (and the song) make me want to do it!

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    1. That’s brilliant, Muri! Put your wellies on and off you go! Wait, you don’t need wellies—barefoot will do!

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      1. Hehe!! I don’t have any wellies! So barefoot will have to do!

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      2. It is going to rain again! So I just need to find a puddle!!

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      3. Don’t forget to sing!

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      4. Hehe! I’m singing loudly!

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      5. Keep it down a bit—I can hear it from here! 😂

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  4. Fabulous Lesley, we all should jump in a puddle – wash away the constraints of age, a great photo of you too! I love the musical version it is like a song from a show – brilliant🙌

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    1. Thank you so much, Ange! Isn’t it marvellous that we can now put our words to music‽ I’d love it to be in a show or a panto. 🎭 🥳 Thank you for your lovely comment xxx

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      1. Yes I love it – and that one should be in a show or a brilliant addition for a pantomime 🙌

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      2. 😁 Thank you 🙏 xxx 🎵💖

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  5. I felt the freedom and joy in this ❤️

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    1. Thank you, Lisa 🙏😊💖

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  6. Beautifully written and melodiously sung! I loved, loved and loved it! 🥰

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    1. Thank you, Balroop 🙏 I’m thrilled you enjoyed it! 💕

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  7. Delightful poem and song, Lesley! And the photo wrapped it all up in a great big beautiful bow! Very well done! Brava!! 👏🏼

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    1. Thank you so much, Nancy! Delighted you enjoyed it 💕😊 xxx

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  8. What a delightful poem, Lesley! I enjoyed it very much!

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  9. We could all spend more time seeing the world through the eyes of a child…(K)

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  10. Love this joyful poem/ song Lesley. A beautiful way to celebrate the rain. Thanks for joining in.

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    1. Thank you, dear Sadje. I loved your inspirational prompt. 💗☔️

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      1. You’re very welcome

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  11. Your poem invites us to rediscover that part of ourselves that can still laugh in the rain, get wet without guilt, and celebrate the simple things.

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    1. Muchísimas gracias, Lincol. I truly appreciate your comment 🙏💖 ☔️

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