Dawn Bomb is my second attempt at writing a memento poem. (My first was written back in 2023: An Old Spanish Love Song.)
The form was created by Emily Romano and is designed to capture a holiday, anniversary, or any meaningful moment.

This poem is written in two stanzas. Each stanza follows the same syllabic pattern:

• Line 1: 8 beats
• Line 2: 6 beats
• Line 3: 2 beats

The pattern repeats once per stanza, creating a rhyme scheme of a / b / c / a / b / c in each section.
Dawn Bomb | Artwork Illustration©️Lesley Scoble

Andrew and I had only just settled into our new home in the City of London when a violent explosion tore through the area — one of the IRA attacks that marked the late 1980s and 1990s.

Written for the W3 Poetry prompt #195, which invited us to create a Memento poem.
My thanks to Marion Horton, Poet of the Week, for devising this inspiring and challenging prompt.
My gratitude, as always, to David Bogomolny, who offers us fresh poetic inspirations each week on the W3 Poetry platform.
And of course, my thanks to you, the reader, for spending time with my poem.


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6 responses to “Dawn Bomb: Memento Poem”

  1. This captures the shock and horror of the incident so well Lesley- it must have been so frightening ♥️

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  2. A very frightening incident.

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  3. It must have been shocking and terrifying! “exploding sunlit sleep’ captures how within a moment happiness/contentment can be ripped away. Something we are see all too much these days.

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  4. I can’t imagine waking to a bomb/explosion like that. Your memento poem captures the shock and horror of the experience.

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  5. Being awakened by such a travesty; horrifying. You captured the incident so vividly.

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  6. Can only imagine how frightening that must have been. The line ‘exploding sunlit sleep’ captures perfectly that moment when innocent slumber was destroyed by violence. A wonderful memento poem. But an unsettling experience for you to recall.

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