Dawn Bomb is my second attempt at writing a memento poem. (My first was written back in 2023: An Old Spanish Love Song.)
The form was created by Emily Romano and is designed to capture a holiday, anniversary, or any meaningful moment.

This poem is written in two stanzas. Each stanza follows the same syllabic pattern:

• Line 1: 8 beats
• Line 2: 6 beats
• Line 3: 2 beats

The pattern repeats once per stanza, creating a rhyme scheme of a / b / c / a / b / c in each section.
Dawn Bomb | Artwork Illustration©️Lesley Scoble

Andrew and I had only just settled into our new home in the City of London when a violent explosion tore through the area — one of the IRA attacks that marked the late 1980s and 1990s.

Written for the W3 Poetry prompt #195, which invited us to create a Memento poem.
My thanks to Marion Horton, Poet of the Week, for devising this inspiring and challenging prompt.
My gratitude, as always, to David Bogomolny, who offers us fresh poetic inspirations each week on the W3 Poetry platform.
And of course, my thanks to you, the reader, for spending time with my poem.


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34 responses to “Dawn Bomb: Memento Poem”

  1. This captures the shock and horror of the incident so well Lesley- it must have been so frightening ♥️

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    1. It was just a tad, AJ. Thank you, my friend. 🙏 I wanted to write about a warm summer’s night in Majorca—but the words didn’t come. Why the memory of that time pushed its way into my memento, I know not. xx

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      1. Must be deep seated Lesleyx

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  2. A very frightening incident.

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    1. Why everybody can’t just get on, baffles me. Thanks, Sadje. ❤️

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      1. Some people are so desperate that to them, violence is the only way to express their anger. It is happening all over the world even now.

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      2. 😕Desperately sad and disturbing.

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  3. It must have been shocking and terrifying! “exploding sunlit sleep’ captures how within a moment happiness/contentment can be ripped away. Something we are see all too much these days.

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    1. Thank you, Heather. 🙏🤗 Life is too short for all this animosity. There’s been a sort of peace—but the City still doesn’t have rubbish bins in case of bomb plantings.

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  4. I can’t imagine waking to a bomb/explosion like that. Your memento poem captures the shock and horror of the experience.

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    1. Loudest alarm clock ever. Thanks, Sally. 🤗

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  5. Being awakened by such a travesty; horrifying. You captured the incident so vividly.

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    1. Thank you, O’Nika 🙏

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  6. Can only imagine how frightening that must have been. The line ‘exploding sunlit sleep’ captures perfectly that moment when innocent slumber was destroyed by violence. A wonderful memento poem. But an unsettling experience for you to recall.

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    1. Thank you so much, Marion. I’d wanted to write about a hot summer’s night in Majorca—but the fragrant gentle words that that subject required just didn’t come! I hope I get out of my serious mood soon. Thank you for your wonderful prompt and welcome comment. 🤗❤️

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      1. I think we just have to go where the mood takes us 🤗

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  7. This poem is very vivid. It must have been very shocking for you.

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    1. It was indeed a bit of a shock—I was thrown out of bed entwined with sheets. Thank you, Robbie 🤗❤️

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  8. So powerful, Lesley!

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    1. I thank youmso much, Nolcha 🙏🤗❤️

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  9. And the violence continues. 💔 Sorry to read about this experience, Lesley that you’ve retold through powerful poetry.

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      1. You’re very welcome, Lesley. 🌻xx

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  10. That is definitely an event that would make an impression!! Your poem conveys it perfectly!

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  11. That line “exploding sunlit sleep” really gets me, Lesley—I can feel the shock in it.

    And the way it ends with “the land, the sea, the sky / and war” feels so heavy and human to me…

    ~David

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    1. Thank you, David🙏🤗💖

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  12. I have never heard of a momento poem before. Thank you for opening my eyes and allowing me to experience a new form of poetry.

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    1. It is my pleasure, Jane T. Thank you for reading 🙏😊

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  13. hi, Lesley❣️

    Just wanna let you know that our new W3, hosted by our beloved Svenja, is live until tomorrow:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/01/28/w3-prompt-196-weave-written-weekly/

    I’m sorry for the delayed note – I’ve started a new job and my schedule is all over the place.

    ~David

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  14. Hi Lesley. The IRA incidents had basically dried up by the time I came to the UK. But I remember the horror of the one in Ealing. How the pub shook, and the destruction. I was surprised at how calm everyone was as we just shuffled home. No curiosity. Perhaps we were in shock. And of course the July 7th attacks are stuck in my head.
    It was rather surreal, how everyone just carried on with life.
    Thanks for sharing this poem

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