I’m honoured and delighted to be Poet of the Week for the W3 Weekly We’ave Poetry Prompt #204 which means it’s my turn to offer a prompt. Recently, I’ve been in touch with the great‑niece of Alice Maude Spokes, creator of the Cameo poetry form — so what better prompt than the cameo itself? And with Women’s History Month drawing to a close, what better moment to celebrate the woman who gave us this beautifully minimalist form.

To read my prompt guidelines and details of the cameo poetry form click below.

I first encountered the cameo form through Val’s (aka Murisopsis) W3 prompt #101. It was entirely new to me. Her Scavenger Hunt site noted that the form was of English origin, created by the poet Alice Spokes as an exercise in rhythm.

Who is Alice Maude Spokes?
Curious to learn more about the poet behind the cameo, I began searching for details of her life and work. I searched widely and could find almost nothing about her. I came up empty. I thought Alice Spokes deserved wider recognition.

In a postscript to my first ever cameo, Hammersmith Bridge, published April 2024 in response to the W3 cameo prompt, I asked if anyone knew anything to let me know. I hoped there might be someone who could tell me more.

More than a year later, I was over the moon to receive a message from her great‑niece (also named Alice). We’ve been corresponding ever since, and she has generously shared details about her great‑aunt’s life and work. Some of that story follows.

Creator of the Cameo Poetry Form

Alice Maude Spokes at her desk | Photo courtesy of Alice Zeeman

One treasured detail from this period is a round oxidised silver plaque depicting Cleopatra at her bath, a gift from her uncle at Ellington’s silversmiths. The piece was later inherited by her great‑niece, its origins only recently rediscovered through the journal.

Her war poem Undaunted also inspired Sir Winston Churchill, who referred to it in a broadcast with the line “the sky‑raining shrapnel” as ‘The Stokes Method’ (sic: Stokes instead of Spokes).

One of her most remarkable achievements is her reinterpretation of Milton’s Paradise Lost in cameo form. Here from Spoke’s original manuscript is the first cameo from Book I.

Milton’s Paradise Lost Done in Cameo Form by Alice Maude Spokes | Excerpt from Book 1, Line 1

It feels a little daunting to follow Alice Maude Spokes’s original cameo poems with one of my own. I also confess that writing to my own prompt wasn’t easy. I had hoped to write a tribute to the gracious creator of the Cameo form, and to Women’s Month, but instead I found myself writing about my unease around AI: the possibility of widespread unemployment, and the uneasy idea of machines gaining something like sentience.

Didn’t Facebook once shut down some AI bots because they created their own language and started talking to each other?

*In 2017, Facebook’s AI Research Lab ran an experiment with two negotiation bots designed to learn how to bargain with one another. During training, the bots drifted into a compressed shorthand that wasn’t standard English. This wasn’t evidence of sentience or secret communication; it was simply the model optimising for efficiency in a closed system (or so AI told me when I asked it). Researchers ended the experiment because the behaviour wasn’t useful for their goals, not because the bots were “talking behind our backs.”


Acknowledgements

  • My grateful thanks to Alice Zeeman for so generously sharing her knowledge about the creator of the Cameo poem.
  • My thanks to Dennis Johnstone for selecting me as Poet of the Week.
  • My thanks to David, The Skeptic’s Kaddish, for his W3 Poetry Prompts and his never‑ending encouragement.
  • And my thanks to you, dear reader, for spending time with my post.

I look forward to all your responses to my cameo prompt!


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24 responses to “Alice Maude Spokes: The Cameo”

  1. What a cool thing to talk to the great niece!

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    1. I know! 😎 It’s so cool. 💙

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  2. great info on Alice. Thanks.
    AI 🤖 if it can sulk you bet it can hate and if it can hate it can…

    scary place to be today. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Thank you, Selma. May I wish you a happy weekend. 💓

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  3. […] first attempt at a Cameo poem, written for W3 #204 and inspired after reading Lesley Scoble’s information on the creator of the Cameo form, Alice Spokes, here. Within that article, it is hinted that Spokes re-imagined the whole of Milton’s Paradise Lost […]

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  4. Wow. Very cool information. She did the whole of Paradise Lost in this form?! Such an interesting idea….

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    1. I know. It’s absolutely brilliant. I’m a fan of Spoke’s writing and of Milton (whose tomb is just down the road from where I live). I’m absorbed in studying it to the full at the moment.

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      1. I haven’t tackled the original yet but imagine the cameo version may be a little easier to read?

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  5. I love this post – learning more about Alice Spokes and your poem (of course). AI kind of spooks me. I worry about the dampening effect on creativity when poets can be replaced…

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    1. Thank you, Muri — and thank you as well for introducing me to the cameo!

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  6. A beautiful poem my friend.

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    1. Thanks so much, Sadje ☺️ 🙏

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  7. I loved this informative post on Alice. And your poem makes me hope there is still some time before AI begins exhibiting human characteristics!

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  8. Fascinating story. Thanks. And I loved the Paradise Lost!

    The Churchill connected seems a bit of a myth though. Or at least I have been unable to track it down. I can seem to find any “sky-raining shrapnel” in “Undaunted” nor any record of Churchill saying it. He was fond of drawing on poets but I couldn’t find any connection with Spokes (or Stokes).

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  9. Thank you for telling us about Alice Spokes. So many talented and interesting people out there who seem to fly just under the radar. This was a wonderful prompt for this week. Thank you.

    I enjoyed your cameo. The thought of AI having enough personality to sulk is scary.

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  10. I was looking forward to the background story Lesley, and you don’t disappoint. I hope Alice enjoys all of our tributes to her great-aunts form, I really enjoyed this prompt and what a wonderful connection you have made, thank you for sharing 💞

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  11. A wonderful piece of history, Lesley, and isn’t it great that Alice’s form lives on. A fascinating woman. Thank you for all the background. I too worry about the use of AI – where we see it and where we don’t.

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  12. Lesley, this is great info about Alice Spokes and about AI. Your poem is very thought provoking about what’s to come in the future. Thank you. 🙏🏽😊

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  13. Your poem is very good, Lesley. I just ran out of time today 🤦‍♀️

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  14. This is so cool, Lesley! I’m jealous ❤

    Thank you for the prompt and also for sharing Alice’s story!

    ~David

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  15. Well done on the Alice Spokes spoof. i would love to see more of her cameo versions of Milton.

    You might enjoy the poetry of C. Langley Dunwood.

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    1. I thought Alice Maude Spokes was a spoof! I was wrong. The Connecticut newspaper archives show that Spokes (1881-1977) was a very active social presence.

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