I wrote my poem Knock at the Wake to the W3 Poetry Prompt #205, where the Poet of the Week, Marion Horton, invites us to explore the theme: Beneath the Surface. 

“With spring flowers pushing up along the verges, it’s easy to forget how long they lay buried in darkness as bulbs. That contrast draws my attention to what remains unseen—what lies beneath, whether in the soil or within ourselves.”

“I’m curious to see what emerges.”

“Write in any form in 20 lines or fewer.” (Oops, I think my poem overruns by 5 very short lines).

My first idea was to write about snowdrops in a silent woodland, pushing their way up through from the dark, frozen depths of winter. How I got from there to an Irish tale about a young woman lying in her grave, I can’t imagine.

Knock at the Wake, Digital pencil and ink©️Lesley Scoble

Knock the Wake, written and narrated and sound design by Lesley Scoble
Grave of Marjorie McCall, The Shankill Graveyard

ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
My thanks to Marion Horton for inspiring my poem with her Beneath the Surface prompt.
My thanks as always to the maestro, David, The Skeptics Kaddish for his amazing poetic encouragement.
And my gratitude to you, the reader, for spending time with me.


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29 responses to “Knock at the Wake: Narrative Poem in Free Verse and Audio Narration”

  1. Oh my!! A poetic retelling of the gruesome fate!!

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    1. 😁 Thank you, Muri! 👻

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  2. Excellent. The poem works well but it’s your disciplined, old-school theatrical delivery that elevates it to the truly macabre. All it needs is her talking to her husband, “come to bed, husband dear”. 🫣😎😁👏👏👏

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    1. Thank you, Dennis. ☺️
      That line is a must!

      all eyes turned
      from grief to fear

      “Let’s go to bed, my husband dear,”

      and he fainted
      in the hall

      😂😂😂

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  3. I remember learning about this and seeing it in a horror film – it really did frighten me, the thought of being buried alive … 😱

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    1. Thanks, Suzanne.
      May I ask what the film was? I don’t know of it. xx

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      1. It was a long time ago…. I can’t remember, but the woman was buried and clawing to get out,,, you see her hand eventually push through the soil….. my best friend loved horror films, it was her choice, I think I sat with my hands over my eyes most of the time! It’s over 40 years ago…. 😱💞

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      2. 😆 Hehe heh, scaredy cat 🙀

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    2. I’m sure that I saw this in a horror film one time too but the movie that comes to mind more recently was in Kill Bill (which Tarantino may have been paying homage to).

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      1. I haven’t watched that, but the one I was thinking of would be very old, probably black and white and I was too young to have been watching it really. It may have been a film called “The Premature Burial” released 1962 (it would have been mid to late 70s I watched it) based on the short story by Edgar Allan Poe…. I found a review on Wikipedia – and it’s a possible, but I don’t think I will watch the old film again 😂

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  4. I have goosebumps after listening to your audio narration. Listening enhances the rhyme within the poem too. I so enjoyed all of this. The history is horrific isn’t it? Brava 👏👏, Lesley

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    1. ☺️ Thanks, Artie 🤗

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  5. A veritable feast.

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    1. Thank you so much, Paul! 🤗

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  6. What a lovely little tidbit of real history transformed into a gothic suspense! Thank you for this adventure Lesley!

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    1. Oh, thank you, Violet. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the adventure! 🤗 I’m well chuffed.

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  7. This is a great poem based on a terrific story. What a lucky woman.

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    1. Thank you so much, Robbie! ☺️🤗 She was indeed most fortunate that the grave robbers dug her up,

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  8. Lesley, I love how “I opened my eyes they ran off screaming” flips the poem from eerie to almost darkly funny :-)

    ~David

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    1. 😁 Hehe, thank you so much. Maestro. 🙏

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  9. A very interesting and engaging post: it blends poetry, history, and mystery in a captivating way, showing how what lies “beneath the surface” can give life to stories that are as unsettling as they are fascinating.

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    1. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Lincoln. Muchísimas gracias 🙏

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  10. hi, Lesley❣️

    This week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Nigel, will be live until next Monday (April 13):

    W3 Prompt #206: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy 🙃

    Much love,
    David

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  11. Brilliant story and write Lesley 👏 The simple epitaph on the gravestone is hilarious in retrospect!

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    1. Thank you, Shaun. I agree, it is rather understated.

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  12. That must have been a sight to see!

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