Haibun


Written for d’Verse Poets Haibun Monday: Silence.

My thanks to Frank J. Tassone for inspiring me “to write a haibun that alludes to silence.”


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30 responses to “The Quiet Wood: Haibun”

  1. Love this, Lesley. So descriptive, I actually heard the twig snap! Nicely done 👏🏼

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    1. Aw, Thank you so much, Nancy. I’m nervous about writing haiku and haibun. I’m in awe of everyone who can write it. 🙏💗 I truly appreciate your kind comment.

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  2. A wonderful depiction of silence. So precious.

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    1. Thank you, Robbie 🙏

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  3. I love the way you used space and words to capture silence, Lesley, those ancient trees standing aloof, ‘like sentinels in a breathless wood’, and the twigs cracking like gunshot enhances it.

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    1. Thank you tons, Kim. 🤗 I appreciate your kind comment. 🙏

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      1. My pleasure, Lesley.

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  4. I love the tension in your Haibun. Well done.

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    1. Thanks so much, my kind friend 🤗

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  5. That twig is like a gunshot in such silence… wonderful

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    1. Enormous thanks, Björn. 🙏

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  6. The sounds of silence awakened by the twig—a gunshot in the silence!! Beautiful writing, Lesley.

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    1. Enormous thanks, Colleen. I appreciate your compliment so much. 🙏

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      1. You’re so lovely, Lesley. You’re so welcome. 💙

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      2. Aw,☺️ thank you 🤗

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  7. Great haibun, Lesley. Love how you describe the fractured silence in a space tense with absence and watchfulness.

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    1. Thank you so much, Dora. I really appreciate your comment. 🤗💗

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      1. My pleasure! 💖

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  8. What we hear is often based on what we don’t. (K)

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    1. So true, Kerfe. 🤗 I appreciate your comment. 💗

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  9. A very touching Haibun Lesley.

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    1. Thank you, my kind friend. 🤗

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      1. You’re very welcome

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    1. Thanks so much, Muri! 🤗

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  10. The poem describes a very quiet forest, without birds or wind. Only the sound of the stream can be heard, and at the end, a branch snaps like a gunshot. It conveys solitude and a nature that seems watchful.

    Best regards.

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    1. Thank you for your comment, Lincol. Much appreciated, amiga mia. 🤗

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    1. Thank you, Lisa 😊💖

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