We live in the City of London, in a flat thatโ€™s almost entirely glass. On the balcony weโ€™re growing orange trees and tomato plants, both thriving in the heat. We saved struggling tadpoles from a parched pond in our local wildlife garden and managed to return them as froglets during our one and only day of rain in early June. Not a single drop of rain has fallen since then.

In July, temperatures climbed above 34ยฐC for fourteen consecutive days, with 37ยฐC recorded at Kew Gardens. A severe drought was declared.

My poem Lovely Grey and the song Rattle My Rain Stick were inspired by that hot-as-Hades spell.

Lovely Greyยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble

Here are two audio versions of Lovely Grey โ€” a spoken-word narration by yours truly, and a musical interpretation that took the poem in such an unexpected direction that I gave it a new title: Rattle My Rainstick.

Narrated by me

Lovely Greyยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble

A musical interpretation based on the poem Lovely Grey.

Rattle My Rain Stick | Song performed by AI Singer | Lyrics, Sound design, and Editingยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble

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21 responses to “Lovely Grey: poem in free-verse and a song ๐ŸŽถ”

  1. I loved your recital, Lesley. I could hear the frustration in your tone. The desperation for divine intervention. Lyrically it is a beautiful piece as well.

    Great job on the poem, Lesley.

    loved the Sonu creation as well. You’re getting better and better with that tool.

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    1. Oh, thank you so much, Nigel. I love the musicality of the song โ€” Iโ€™m notating the melody and the instruments so thereโ€™ll be a hard copy of the score. The orchestration of the ending just needs a little more thought. xxx

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  2. I am glad you’re investing the time to get it just right because it sounds really good. Refine it..get. ahard copy of the score, and have it recorded again..live. it is a lovely piece.

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  3. Focuses on how the specific details (the glass flat, the saved tadpoles, Kew Gardens temperatures) make climate anxiety real, traces the arc from observation to prayer to ritual, and celebrates how the audio versions offer different emotional dimensions.

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    1. Thank you, she who knows all. I truly appreciate your thoughtful and insightful comment. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’—

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  4. Not the England I grew up in, so many days – unheard of, so many fires – not normal!

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    1. And not William Blakeโ€™s โ€œgreen and pleasant landโ€ either. ๐Ÿ˜ข

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  5. I hope you get some rain soon.

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    1. Thank you, Sadje ๐Ÿค—

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      1. Most welcome Lesley

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  6. Hi Lesley, I do feel your pain about no rain. Youโ€™d never survive here. We get no rain for six months of the year. By now, August, itโ€™s dry as a bone and October is called suicide month. It rains in late October.

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    1. Oh, Robbie, How do you manageโ€ฝ At least you know when to expect it. I got excited yesterday when a cloud floated across the sky. But it disappeared.

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      1. I suppose humans adapt. Our rain doesnโ€™t always come. Sometimes we have droughts and thereโ€™s no rain for over a year. I like rain and droughts are awful. I hope you get rain soon. London is horrible in very hot weather. At least here the sun goes down by 7.30pm so thereโ€™s some relief from the blazing sun.

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      2. London is supposed to be wet and grey and miserable ๐Ÿ˜‚

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      3. ๐Ÿค๐Ÿฉถ๐Ÿ–ค

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  7. Lesley – this is a delightful poem! The spacing and stanzas staggered really do add that extra “umph”!!

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